rate_review Reviews

This is a great fic. It's just at the end of chpt. 4 you said to Draco not to use Hedwig. I thought she died during the summer.

Loved it! Ron's such a jerk, at least he foiled Dumbledore's plan.

I am really enjoying your story...I think that I have read it before though I don't remember how far you got then? I wish that Ron wasn't always such an ass. One of these days he will grow up and realize that his temper is only going to bring him lonliness...

By the way, if you re-read my story soul bound the chapter on family tree where lilly is talking about lonliness, the hint it there, lol!

ooohhh me likey, me likey! in all honesty it sounds like a great story and i can't wait to read more. update soon *kisses*

ch 4: Enjoyed reading it so far. The reveal of TMR as Harry's sperm donor is much more dramatic in class.

so harry to draco the dark lords real name in the second chapter and again in the third, did draco just forget or what? but other wise good, for some reason i feel as tho i have already read this story or maybe yours will just be similar to it. Either way i likes.

great story...you do have one small goof though...you had harry and draco talking about tom marvolo riddle and then in chapter 3 draco was asking who he was...update soon, i want to know more!

I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter to come out.

Oh that was so cool! Sorry for not reviewing sooner, had a few problems with the internet, was looking down the list of previous sites and thought i'd re-read this. Never noticed you'd updated. Anyway cool chapter. And sorry for taking your reply the wrong way. You'll definitely get sick of reading this but i love your story and cant wait for the next update. Very cool way of anouncing his new allegiances to the world, he he.

Until next time.

Vitt

Hey there :) I'm not sure if I like the rewrite of the story better than the original one. I think the first version had a bit more personal drama to it. As of yet I'm not displeased with it ;) Although it's weird to read a story of which you already know a bit of where it's heading... you know, the "hey, I recognise this, ow wait, maybe I don't" :D I am curious about what's going to happen next though, so I'll be checking in on the story :P I think you have a very creative mind, and I like your plots/storylines. A minor negative though; your style is a bit wooden (can you put it like that in english?), but I trust that in given time you will manage to develop a more flowing style of writing. Well, I hope you'll enjoy writing it as much as we do reading ;)