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for Too Beautiful For You

by HeadGirl

schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww. i was really hoping for some sirixremmy smex, but i think i liked what happened better. it makes me feel comfortable with the whole remxtonks thing. good job!~
person LimeMime
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Really nice work.
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was SO awesome. I laughed so hard through the last chapter.
person keebz
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you put much more closure and explanation on remus and tonks relationship than anything rowling could have done, but i'm still horribly mad at that sirius and lupin did not end up together in the series.

nonetheless this is a beautiful story. Lupin is captured perfectly, and you did wonders with Sirius' smug and jocular way.

I almost died when Sirius said "So my son...when you have these feelings, do you touch yourself?"
person Soap1
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Quite incredible! I loved it!
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not bad..though...i think it might actually be better if sirius and moony ended up together..
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was beautiful...I didn't care for the ending... :) I wanted them to get together,lol...
Well-written all the same.
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok. not much more to say than: MORE DAMNIT!!!!!!!!
person Sekhmet
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon?! It's fantastic
person kalaway
schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really good! I adore Remus/Sirius, and your characterization is excellent. I love the 'blundering-can't-find-the-words' Remus. Please continue!