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by YamiBakura

schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how the link for review reads "Review It."
It: I assumed that 'it' was sex and when there wasn't any I was deeply disappointed. I mean how could my favorite authoress disappoint me like that. And Draco baking cookies, the muggle way? I don't believe it and yet he did, well atleast in this story.
No: So there was something speacial about the cookies. A lust potion, as if he really needed it. Who wouldn't want to sleep with the grey eyed, blond sex god? Yea he told him 'no' alright, Harry shook his head. "God, no, don't stop."
Um: Um yea. Are you good or what!?! I wonder if she ran to Ron? Don't give me that look, most stories I read she's paired with Ron.
Oh: You know, I've had my own version of this. I won fiftey bucks. Of course I used ben'wa balls and didn't stick them up my ass. But still same concept. Well not that I think about it I just had to keep them in, wearing a skirt and no panties. You should have seen the teachers face when my friend lost her 'grip'.
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
******[WARNING] ADULT CONTENT. NUDITY.

Just thought that the other Harry Draco lovers would appreciate this. Now all we need is Tom Felton. Yea, You know I've asked my friends what would they do if Daniel and Tom stumbled across the seedy fanfiction and got so enthralled with it, they acted out some of the scenes. Yeah, life would be good. Now I'm asking you the same thing. What would you do if Daniel fall into Tom's arms after reading a fanfic like this, and Tom just can't help himself he has to have him right then and there? Would you wanna watch? Hell I know I would, and join in if they let me.

******http://www.inklingblog.com/2007/02/23/harry-potter-full-frontal/#more-1087
person graballz
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4--OH WOW THAT WAS SO CUTE AND HOTT ALL AT THE SAME TIME!!!!! If Draco and Harry are taking names for sitting in and watching them fuck...WHERE DO I SIGN UP???????? That was really SEXY and HOT with Pansy!!! And the game!! OMG I laughed my ass off! (PS Other games?? Sex under the teachers' seats at Quidditch? *drool* SCORE! And suddenly, everything about Quidditch is suddenly dirty!! haha)

And that was really sweet of you to mention me at the top! Thanks! *hugs* With regards to my review...you totally earned it. It was all you, baby!

PS I'm in London right now, and I'M GOING TO SEE EQUUS TOMORROW NIGHT!!! Daniel Radcliffe NAKED is going to be SOOO hot!!
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a game! Though I think Harry won! Can't wait for ch 5! *Looks around bedroom and sees snoring hubby.* Nope, live in the real world with a fractured in a cast wrist. *sigh* Someone hates me!
person Night the Storyteller
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually - not much stories here would include something like chapter 4! And I just love it...really hot and intoxicating! Please write more / start a new soon!
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA That's bloody awesome! I love the innuendos and suggestiveness!
person Tia
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it :)
person Danine
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha awesome!~
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AH is it stopping here??? It cannot stop here! DAH I love Draco's "excuse me, muggle-born??" reaction there, ehehe Please write more! Please?
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don't live on here. I read at 3 other sites as well! At home with a badly sprained wrist (I hope the dr agrees with me at my re-evaluation) so I have plenty of time to read, peck out reviews and just keep up! Keep up the fantastic writing! I love it and am honored that you dedicated both the story and sequel to me! @--->---