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for Swallow

by AkitoSouma

person yoblossom
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a good start and I really hope you'll post more. Draco trying to talk is just so adorable.
person Nagini
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your fic is one of the best i ever read, and i mean it, i really hope that you will continued this fic. sorry for the bad english, that is not my mother tongue.
person Anon
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please add another chapter with smut ;)
person heaven56
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I live the the whole Lucius thing. He keeps away from his son. But he knows he wants to be with him. Very nice.
person Anon
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! That was a fucking awesome fic. I loved it. Continue it please!
person Jien
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude, you should update soon, i'm kept in suspense on what's gonna happen next =>.<=
person ulla
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will Draco be three years old throughout the entire story, or will he age as the story progresses?

Great descriptions and characterization so far. I'm looking forward to more.
person Kuro
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting chapter... I love Malfoy-cest and to see it blossom instead of rushing to the smut is quite pleasant. Keep up the good work!!
person Heksy
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Taking the risk of this becoming more than a one-shot, I have to say
the story moved me.
Can you not write another story about this, with the use of all the warnings etc and leave this one like it is?
It's just that I'm seeing those type of stories everywhere and it would be nice to have one just like this one.
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww. that was so sad. *tear* it makes me want to cry.