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for Swallow

by AkitoSouma

person ChiNoHana
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
call me perverse and sik but... please hurry?? v.v'
person ToRaNoMe
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaw
baby draco is just adorable!! =3

i could really feel all the emotions while reading, very well written, keep up the good work ^^
person Robyn
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please keep writing!!!
person o_o
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
antd the later chapters where are they?
person (:
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL. I like this story. Nice and intense. Please write more!
person arien
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
give me more!!! please, do continue..i give you my happy review that i thought draco was the cutest in your story than all the previous...!
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it. it's sad because you see a lot of stories under this category that are good but for some reason they never continue...i hope continue this one. i likeyour writing style.
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, this chapter was so cute! I'm looking foreward to more ^_^
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this story ^^ It looks so promising~
person Mike
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DEFINATELY continue this story. I read "Crazed" and I must say that you are a very talented writer! Usually when I come to this site, I'm met with (to put it bluntly) half-assed attempts at story telling. Punctuation, grammer, and sentence structure is often over looked for the sake of illustrating a dirty sex scene-- but you manage not only to write properly, but to construct beautiful metaphors. Your write beautifully even if the topics are a little, shall we say, risque. I enjoyed BOTH stories immensely, and desperately wish that you continue with your writing endeavors. I will read ANYTHING you write.

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