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by dolcina

person Isake
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh....

One word:

MORE!!!!!!

::begs::
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woah....you better not say this is just a one shot. It was funny how Neville became so popular and got Harry and Ron Jelous. I also like the detail that you put into everything almost like painting a picture.

I promise that I will review each chapter that you put up.
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked that. It was rather amusing. I wouldn't mind reading more of it. Could you be so kind as to write it?
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Erm....please please PLEASE tell me this wasn't a one shot! LoL


Update! I want more! ^__^
person Dorian
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting plot, though very unrealistic. :)
The characters are a tiny bit OOC sometimes, but it wasn't bad on that part either.
Another chapter would be cool.