rate_review Reviews

Absolutely brilliant. Masterpiece. The style of writing captures Lucius' personality in a way so perfect that it simply leaves me wordless. Also, for us with this certain thing for Cruciatus!sex, your wonderful work gives excellent inspiration. *Pure* perfection.

Chapters 1-8: This is a great take-off on a self-help book. Can't call it "Cruciatus for Dummies" though, because no dummy would live past the first attempt. I can just see Lucius getting a cruciatus as a punishment from Voldie for being himself - an arrogant, holier-than-thou Pureblood - and Lucius rolling around on the ground feigning intense pain while just lapping up the sensations. I guess he must trust the Dark Lord not to overdo on the duration or intensity, but just fry him a little for a perceived transgression (which I wouldn't put it past Lucius to have invited with unacceptable behavior - LOL).

Fine idea and beautifully executed. Very well written, "Lucius"!!

Hmmm wonder what voldemort would think of this..... lol

Okay, this is awesome! You seem to have a wicked sense of humour and I am dying to read the rest of this volume. You've got LM's voice down very well...I can almost hear his voice *purring* with your words! (His frequent references to S & M...verrry nice...) So yes, please continue this!

I am chomping at the bit to see the 3rd chapter of this masterpiece.
You are a wonder. Dont stop this one until its finished or alot of people (Im sure billions) will be very angry with you,myself included.

GREAT!FANTASTIC! HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT ONE!