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for Secret Life Of

by ButterflyBlues

person Anon
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohh, lovely and clever! I had no idea it was a routine until I reread the ending. The "love you" she signed off with seemed a bit odd at first as did the "it's getting old". Then, after an embarassingly long time, I finally cottoned on. Good show!
person sticky
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so clever! Very good. They were both so in character. It's always the bookworms...
person Panther Eyes
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i swear people have the most interesting ways to keep a relationship going n fun.
person desra467
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your fanfic, but I think you need to have more detail when you write the sex scenes. Also, include some foreplay! In addition, check your spelling. You did well with this fanfic. I really, really hope you write some more and you have taken my advice to heart. Thanks.