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for Fine line between love and hate

by JaynaM

person Windsong21
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please write more! You're a very talented writer and I can't wait until the next chapter! ^_^.
person Dravana
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please continue asap... i love this story
person Avanell
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Getting very interesting, although I loved the Vodka chapter. but now Draco in a muggle house for the holidays? Hmm...
person Melissa
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, interesting! I can't wait to find out what happens next! :)
person deeply.jaded
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You've updated, yey!!!
Love the bathroomscene. But what terrible news, both his parents died...
That's hard. But how have they died? I'm curious. Well not that it matters much.
And she has invited him over for christmas?? WOW. Wonder how that will go. But it really opens a lot of uppotunity for them to bring it to another level (if you get my meaning...haha.) Just two tips; 'H. said looking at him in a confused manor'(= manner)-ch 3 and 'people were wandering' (= wondering)- ch 4. Hope you don't mind...
I'm looking foward to your next chapter.

DJ
person Adrienne
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really good start! I hope there's more soon. That's sad that his mom died. Lucius deserved it. I hate him.
person Deeply.Jaded
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First fic huh? Well, you've done a great job!!
Very different from all other stories in wich Malfoy is the badass.
Hermione really thinks he's a nobody. I'm wondering how that is going to change.
Just one remark. Usually one ends a sentence with a dot (.)haha, you've seem to mis some. Don't be angry!!
I like your story and wonder where it is going.
I'm looking foward to your next update.

DJ
person Avanell
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice new chapter...please update again soon!
person Melissa
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! This story has me itching to find out what happens next. Please update soon!
person Emmylovedraco
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it please update soon,

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