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for Angel Dark

by dolcina

schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say that I find no words to describe how amazing I think your story was. All that tension building up inside of Remus... and the aftrmath is just so powerfull... you do magnificently at portraying both Remus' and Tonk's emotions... I honestly found it incrdible... you should continue this story.. either back or forwards in time... Please do... i absolutely love this story... especially the end... you got some really powerfull things going on there before dawn.
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*speechless*
person Isake
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Remus and Tonks, the angst in this was amazing! You have captured all that was not shown in HBP, as to why Tonks was acting the way she was...Very Very Good!
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, sweet Remus/Tonks bliss! You did an excellent job at this fic, a short, sad moment between them and hot passionate sex is just the right combination. I loved the parting, loved it a lot. The note were words I could hear from Remus Lupin, definitely.

I can't think of an appropriate song for this particular fic, I always thought 'We're in this together' by NIN was a very appropriate RL/NT song, but this requiers something sadder...

Just a teeeeeeny small comment I'd like to make: I noticed you used the word 'die' to express very intense emotions. Nothing wrong with that! Though it had me fooled that you were going to imply something interesting regarding his moon curse and the person he loves most. Not really criticism, just something that had me fooled ;)

Ah, speaking of songs, how about My Immortal by Evanescence?

Cheers, and happy writing!!
person Paige
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this is a beautiful and sad story. I love everything about it. It is what a pre-HP Half Blood Prince should be. Great job!
person me oh my oh
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was amazing... i was almost crying. it was right on, perfect

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