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schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy Hermione when she is bad. You do a wonderful job portraying her. I can't wait till the next chapter.
person DB1
schedule January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@11. Awesome story!! I can't wait for an update. I think she should pick blaise, only cause it would be interesting and she could still be with both dark lord and lucius!!! Please update soon

*DB*
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How wonderfully raunchy!! lol! Nothing like wet panties to make the day cumplete! Cheers!
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying your story!!!! I don't think I've read a story this bold in a while; BRAVO!!!!! It takes guts to be so brutal about the "Light", and you've pulled it off beautifully! I knew exactly what reference you were making earlier, and I must say, it's nice to come across someone else who knows about The 10th Kingdom! LoL! I've not only seen the movie, but also own a copy of the book. Cheers! I can't wait to see whom she chooses!
person Juli Black Potter
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey fantastic chapter.
Update soon.
person anon
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, keep writing :D
person Anon
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, I love Deni with Voldemort. she'll probably marry Draco, but I will secretly hope for Deni/Voldemort XD
I love this story, keep writing and update soon!
person ozarkmoon
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yum! A chapter with Lucius. Who could ask for anything more? Well, I *could* ask for another one with him at some point down the road (hint, hint)! LOL! Very interesting premise here and I'm eager waiting to see where things go - and who Deni chooses.
person ozarkmoon
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, I almost forgot - a few scenes with the new Headmaster and his wife would be fun to read. I've always wondered how he would be if the Dark won. Hmm.... off to change undies again!
person Revecka
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!