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schedule November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco. Why does one get the impression that Deni would not have done what Draco did to have them be a singular relationship that only includes the two of them? This Hermione seems way too self absorbed. And then once she knew that she was going to marry Draco, she ran out to have as much sex with her two lovers as she could fit in. Even if Draco did not know that he had been chosen yet, she did. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the sequel. Thanks for sharing your story. p
schedule November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well little miss Hermione makes quite the nasty little witch. She was really classless with Narcissa and it was totally uncalled for as far as one could tell. I wonder if Draco would think that she was such a caring person if he knew how she treated his mother. To be sure, Narcissa will never tell him because she would not want to come between she and Draco. She is really hard to take. p
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that makes me sad. It seems that Draco always comes in second best to Lucius. Would love to have seen Draco get the girl (and then Lucius be a lech). About time that Hermione quit being the brains behind that judgemental group and found her way to those who appreciated her "talents". p
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Did the whole Order turn against Hermione? It does not seem possible (no matter what side you are on) that you could enjoy hurting or seeing hurt a childhood friend (like Finnigan, not Ron) or fellow Order member, Tonks, unless they also hung her out to dry. Poor Draco. One feels that he would probably have to look far and wide to find a nice looking woman that his father had not had, huh? :) p
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you changed her name since she was way off character, but I rather liked it. You wrote nice steamy scenes. The story felt like it could have been longer.
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this story. It's so good. and I LOVE Draco and Lucious in it. The Dark Lord is a bit...teensy ensy little bit too soft, but I still like him.

:D
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person DB1
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG its been ages since i read thiss tory!! greta ending, can't wait for the sequel!!!

*DB*
person Siri19
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Keep up the great work. I love the fact that Draco and Blaise both had feelings for Hermione aka Deni. So does Ginny marry Severus? Why does Deni kill her uncle Sirius? Sirius took her in when he found out that she was his neice.