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for A Wager Between Girls

by Lianne

person TiffANY
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is brilliant!

I love the concept

It is very sexy

Ginny is a year below Hermione but it does work better this way

The Severus/Hermione action is hot

And I love Ginny and Lupin

Very well thought out matches

Though, I don't really like the smoking

Please don't let anyone else smoke, especially Hermione!

By the way I wasn't so sure about Barty Crouch Jr being in this story (because he is dead) but he does have sex appeal

Even if he is crazy

Oh, if you are going to do some S&M just make sure it doesn
person Jen
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww, there needs to be more, I hope you update soon.
person angel
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awesome .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person amerwerewolf
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
probably could have waited to publish until you had more, but it is a good start. You do know that one of patil twins is in ravenclaw though, right?
person lisa
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot woot!!!! Yay a fun lil story. Like it. Please ohh please update soon. Seems like 2 of the girls have a head start. Heck Ginny adn Hermione already have a had a lil close encounter with their Professors. lol. I thought at first you'd have 2 of them after the same professor but lol the new Professo's awesome a nd I love Lupin. ANd Oh my god Sexy Snape dont get me started lol. More please. Please update soon.