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for A Wager Between Girls

by Lianne

schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A really good fic. Update soon please!
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome ...hmm was she wearing her neaklace.. please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My goodness! I love this story, and I especially love the Barty Jr. bit. He, and David Tennant are so delicious. And the torture fascination makes it all the better. I must say, I'm inspired to write my own Barty Jr. tale, but I tihnk I'd make it Barty/Hermoine. Though, the Patil twins are very much the sexiest pair in the books, by my accounts.
person LilyLady
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh thing are staring to heat up with ginny .. and what is barty going to do now that he has her in his arms and did he hear what she said .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person catysmom
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Write more soon plz.
person Andi
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Most stories on this site are so poorly written that I skip all back story and whatever filler action there is and get right to the good stuff...but I found myself compelled to read every word of yours...congrats for capturing my picky attention span!
very well written...
please write more soon!
This is very, very hot.
And I love how you used BCJr. I'm actually a major Dr. Who fan..and David Tennant is a sex god...I love picturing him in my mind when I read your story.
Keep up the good work.
<3
person Lianne
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! I just wanted to say thanks for all the awesome reviews so far. I enjoy getting your feedback and encouragement. I feel all warm and fuzzy haha. :)
I'm planning out the rest of the chapters and plot right now, and i'm also getting ready for christmas. But I promise this story will be updated very soon! It's loads of fun, so I won't abandon it. so keep checking back every now and then!

Happy Holidays, everyone.

~Lucifera Black
person TiffANY
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry I haven
person lisa
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg I just realized I mised ch 9 and went back to read it. and omg!!!! fanning self too. quiter hot. and again woot woot wtg Hermione. lol but I suppose a bigger t hanks goes to Severus. more more more please. Please update soon.