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for Broken Home

by Shananigans

person tank
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good stuff! i just love how you potray draco not willing to cry in front of someone, i got the same problem myself! but anyway brilliant chapter ^^
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter a lot. Now I'm just a bit worried about what will happen when Harry sees her, especially if he notices the slash marks. i just hope she doesnt blame draco even more, he doesnt deserve it. though she probably will. so update!
person lisa
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh man I am so addicted to this story. Yay for Harry. and I am glad Draco relented. and it's funny how Harry picked up on his little quirk with the earlobe and lying when he didnt even know he did it. Lol great chappie. Awesome. Ohh I cannot wait for the next chappie. Hermione's gonna be sooo pissed at them both and attempt to push them away. and ugg christmas break is coming isn't it? ohh dear. Lots can happen and I cannot wait to see what happens next. I bet Hermione blows. more more more more please. Please update again so fast. love it when you do.
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A part of me wants to say poor Hermione but I can't even express how much i abhor suicide. its such a selfish idiotic assanine cowardly thing to do. so, can you tell that i know a couple people who did it? assholes (i dont believe in the whole dont speak ill of the dead concept). but anough about that. hopefully counselling will help somehow but really the person im the most sad for right now is draco. he just wanted to help. tear. oh, and im glad to hear that the majority of it isn't from personal experience. i really want looking forward to the drive; i dont think my car would even make it the eight hours to the border, lol.
person sheedy
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please don't think I was unhappy about the electricity idea. I think Hogwarts with cellphones would be fun for a one shot. I am really enjoying your fic please keep up the great work.
Sheila
person lisa
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh dear god, the cutting has started. and thank god Draco helped her. even though she didnt want it. I like Draco in this. I believe he is reacting accordingly. He's faced with something so traumatic and he is a guy, they tend to bundle things up but even when they are faced with something they cannot believe they show their ewmotion. So i love it. and argggg another no chappie day ahhh well, I will be waiting. More more more please. PLease update soon.
person tank
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow ! hard on draco me thinks!
person angel
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man cant she see he is trying to help her ... please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person alyson
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I just wanted to let you know that I love your story! I would be crying too if I was Draco, in fact I did cry! It's so sad poor Hermione. Please update soon!
Love and a Peace,
Kates