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by Shananigans

person lisa
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am just happy you posted. Yay. so good chappie. Hermione's so stubborn but as they say a hard head makes a soft ass. Cant wait for more. am sorry to here you've had troubles . hope it gets better. More more more please. Please update again soon.
person angel
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great i love it .... im happy that draco ,mione and harry are getting alon and harry is going to draco's for christmas .... please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update
person tank
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn everyones catching on now eh?
person angel
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow ... so draco cant lie to harry ... that was awesome ... please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person Lady Lynn
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter! Yeah, I'm sorry that I came off so horrid. I can see where its good for your plot and stuff and yeah. I have the ability to empathise with like the shit shes ben going through and stuff, but my problem (?) is that oncce someone goes for the act, all it does to me is piss me off, leaving no sympathy. This guy I worked with; he was great. He was funny, nice, and just all all around good guy in a father figure type way. Then he went and killed himself after he got fired for stealing out of our managers purse (everyone in the entire store was shocked as fuck about that.. something bad must have been going on for him to do that). I was the only person pretty much who wasn't sitting there crying over it and saying, oh poor eric estrada*, what did he do. I was too pissed off at him and then it turned into this huge fight with this woman about how i would be saying a different tune if he were white and all this bullshit.... so yeah, I have issues, but I do like where youre story is going. My car, yeah. Its an 89 tbird and I must say that i don't take proper care of it.... Im a bad owner.
person ajax
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was brilliant! Please write more!
person lisa
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay an update. Rl calls you cant help it. but I am so glad you posted. Poor Draco he's so confused hisself. He needs to speak with Snape to make sense of it All or he wont be able to help Hermione much. Snape's good at being closed mouth but I believe he is doing more damamge by not demanding a better explanation and not telling Dumbledore. Perhaps he thinks though Draco is the cause and doesnt want to get him in trouble. Suicide is rough and very emotional but I thought you did well with it. when someone truly believes they are better off dead it is hard to convince them otherwise. even those that seem to have everything get that way. depression knows no boundaries. there in lies the confusion. I loved the chappie. It's good Harry knows but he hasnt told anyone either yet. Poor Hermione 3 people now know and are not helping by keeping her secret. Perhaps Draco needs to do some research lol on how to deal with it all. or maybe Harry and he will talk. I love speculating but what I really love is your posting so I can find out. More more more please. Please please update soon. You are doing so awesome.Love the story. awaiting the next.
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Intresting
person angel
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man poor draco ... i hope she will open her eye and see he is try to help her ... please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel