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for Broken Home

by Shananigans

schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great, but sad story. I thought it was terrible for Hermione to die the way she did. I hope you might write a sequel to this story, even if it is short. I would love to find out what happens to Archie and maybe Snape could help deal with Lucius. Also, I feel that Ron and the rest of the Weasley's should be told and a funeral held for her.
person xhanax
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i havent read this yet but the description make da story sound very interesting lol

hana x x x
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know; you should have hermione not dead but in hiding until she settles everything out. Anyway I think that there should be a sequal. Update whenever you can.
person Anon
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*crys*
person Anon
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww no! After all that you killed her off! :( **sniffles** was really gd tho, i liked it :) Vixen x
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AH!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT IS THAT NONSENSE?! Hermione can't be dead!! NOO!!! *cries* Just when they were happy and everything was perfect. I beg you to please write a second part!!! Something! Anything! Just bring her back and let them be happy!! Your story is captivating and moving and I love it oh so much so please, please, write more.
Love and a Peace,
Kates
person Lilum
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aweomse. Hermione is Christian! =P
Joke.
OmG! The shortest chapter?!
Just messing...just messing...
Thanks for not having her heart explode. That would not be good at all...:3
Great story!!!
Updates are greatly appreciated by your anticipating audience ^^
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no she cant be dead.... i hope harry goes and checks on her or even draco ... lucius why could you not just be happy for them ...please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person Anon
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I. CRYED. That was so good!!! I spend all night reading this and i cryed so hard! I cant wait for more and i want to read it sooooo bad!!! There has to be some way that shes going to come back! Why didn't Draco's bracelet let him know she was in danger! I haven't been able to find very many good HP Stories to read in along time and i loved this one!!! NEED MORE!!!
person Magzie
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woooooaaaaaah Chickey!! That was pretty intense... Glad I could help ya out a bit, You took that way further then I would have imagined, very good, Cant wait to see the morning reactions... Yah your crazy, and I love it!