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for For Her Safety

by zairaphel

person Dylan
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start, although you should have put the first two chapters together. I know you authors like to tease the readers, but short chapters just annoys the hell out of me! :)

Anyway, I think this is the first Sirius/Hermione marriage law fic I've read, (it's usually one of the Malfoy's or Snape,) so I look forward to more.
person angel
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow great start ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel