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for For Her Safety

by zairaphel

person angel
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mione you should listen to molly she is right you know .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read nore.. later for now

angel
person angel
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh yes i see her snapping ... please please please please please please please please please please please please upate soon i would love to read more ..later for now

angel
person Dee Dee
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It is one of the few that have SB/HG. I can
person lisa
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow quite interesting. more please update soon please and the last chappie was fine as it was.
person karine_snake
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was good ^^ Please update soon and keep up the good work !
person angel
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well mione took that well .. hmm will mione and sirius be having a little talk later .. please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person DarkLady
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like marriage law fics, at first I only liked the Sev ones but I have since found a whole heap of other ships with the same premise, I think you are doing really well so far and I did like the last chapter, I am looking forward to seeing how Sirius and Hermione interact with each other :)
person Izzie
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Really wonderful beginning! I would have been thrilled to pieces if the chapters were a little denser, but I can't wait to see more!

I think the concept is interesting--I like Sirius/Hermione and I have liked Marriage Law challenges in the past, so a combination of the two seems great. I'm curious to see how they deal with Hermione going back to school and the still-looming threat of Voldemort.
person shygirl
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg i LOVE it! you write beautifully and originally - cant wait for the next chapter!!! xxxx
person angel
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man how is mione going to take to the new about the new law and she marring siri...please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now

angel