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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome chapter! I kinda wonder if it's harry's plan to ignore Draco so much or if it's actually just a coincidence. I want to know who his date is to, update soon!
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far! I like it. As note though, and I'm relatively sure of this though I could be wrong, the latin 'do pacem' means 'I grant peace' not 'to grant peace.' If you wanted to say 'to grant peace' the latin should be 'pacem dare.'
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far. I like to think of Harry as a strong, powerful wizard who nobody pushes around anymore, so the way you portray him seems very correct so far. Of course, his and Dracos marriage isn't really valid yet is it? It's that whole consummation-part *hint hint* Keep it up hon :-)
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really, really, reaaaally like this so far!!! update soon pleeaaase! it's so good! ^_^
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry about your detractors, the story line is good and your writing is not THAT bad! Why is Harry being so cold to Draco, when Lucius has done more to him in the past than Draco has? Also, Harry CHOSE Draco over many others, so why would he act this way?
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this Draco in love and harry is the cold indiffer person who doing a job. What will draco do to get his man. All The Possiablities is boundless. Two things he has to keep his father and mother in check if he want his prize, dealing with harry friends and family. What are the other pairings in the story and different concept too. Not to many good stories about them marriage to keep peace for the wizards world thought Death Eaters contract bond.
please update soon.
please update soon.
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November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good job, I hope you continue!
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I look forward to the next chapter. Please e-mail me when you update at:
justice02908@yahoo.com
justice02908@yahoo.com
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good so far. Can't wait for it to be updated.
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a bit similar to a story ive already read,but still good, be interested to see your take on it.