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for Saving the World is Really Annoying

by Grittie

person vibora
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whew! that was sweet and hot! ^_^ draco gets some better treatment now. :) update soon! will they both go out partying now? ;)
person Amessis
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I did love that! I just hope that Harry doesn't end up hurting Draco before things get better- it seemed like he gave into Draco without thinking, not always a good thing. It's good for Draco of course, I'm sure he cares (loves) about Harry. Can't help but worry.
person melanie
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please dont tell me thats it! i loved it to say the least. but i think it needs a bit more
person Ladynight
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome chapter! I just hope that there was silencing spells in place. :)
person silly
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As intersting as this is it strikes me as silly. Draco is the way he is because of his stupid parents. So Draco doesn't know how to turn tal and become a different person overnight to please everyone. surprise surprise. I like the fact that Draco is still him even if that means not being politically correct. his marriage is a fraud everythinhg his dumb parents taught him growing up entirely uselesss. the only thing he is got is who he is to the day. i jsut think it silly that his parents are looked at as perfect and well mannered which can only be known as fake in the wake of that ill mannered son, Draco which they raised.
person Amessis
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done again! But hey, I can't help feeling sympathy for Draco- how is he suppose to act after Harry basically tells them they'll never have a relationship? Honestly, I'd pissed and say something that I knew would anger the person too!
person rebel_mistress
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, it's quite obvious what Blaise is up to. But Snape? What's his role in Harry and Draco's life? And I'm not sure I got it right when Harry told Draco that they needed to be friends whatever instead of lovers because they might eventually break up and since they should be together forever and ever, it would be harder for them to live in the same house. Um, what's going on inside that mind of his?
And really, Draco is so not fairly treated in that household. Yeah, he has his faults (mainly his usually foul mouth which he couldn't control) but I get this feeling that everything uneventful happening in his and Harry's life as a couple was becasue of him--which I really don't think should be the case because by this chapter it's quite obvious that Harry is not even trying--and most definitely, he's not making things any better/easier for Draco. His excuse was rather pathetic.
But anyway, only you have the answers and explanations to these...I just hope that things, at least some of them, will start to get clear by the next chapter. Hope you'd update soon!
person vibora
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
draco can be SUCH an ass! update soon! ^_^ 'tis a great fic!
person Heidi
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a bonus, I love parselmouth!Harry, he just radiates power. Wonder how he reacts to Dracos kiss. If I had anything to say in the matter he would drag Draco back into the reptile house and have his wicked way with him. But alas, I'm not the author here so I'll just wait for the next chapter like a good little lurker ;-)
person Vittani
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey fantastic please update soon. Loved the parseltongue by the way.