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for My Fair Witch

by Rumpelyssa

person Mariaremarquer
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting take on My Fair Lady. I love it! And snarky Snape is the sexiest kind of Snape there is; I'm glad you haven't made him OOC. Please update soon!
MR
person lisa
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohh myyy. Alone with Severus. if only to be in Hermione's place. I love it. I have seen my Fair Lady, read it in highschool and such. However it is a bit confusing why Severus and Draco have assumed names when Hermione has her real name still. I mean you kinda explained about Severus reason but what is Draco's. and I assume Voldermort's gone. Just wondering. Good chappie. I cannot wait to see what happens next. Severus is so delicious. More please. and update again soon.
person angel
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ that was great ... and now there is a bet going when sev is going to get mione in bed...please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .later for now

angel
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Severus seems rather nice..
person Queen Celestia
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn you, now I have the Only Fools and Horses theme song in my head!
person firewall
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 2 - You've just the right amount of mystery about the story to grab our attention and keep us coming back. Yup, I'll continue reading.
person angel
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ that was great .. i cant wait to read more .. please please please update soon .. later for now

angel
person nightowl
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, that
person beeky63
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi hon, it's been awhile, hasn't it. Real life has become somewhat hectic around here since school started. I loved this chapter, and yes your grammar has improved, well done! You brought back some memories girl with Only Fools and Horses. LOL. And the dropping of h's made me howl with laughter because my husband who is from south Warwickshire always drops his h's. LOL. Can't wait for more. Toodles.
person castle
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FIRST OF ALL I HAVE TO SAY THAT MY FAIR LADY HAS BEEN ON MY TOP 5 MOVIES SINCE I WAS LIKE 7 (IM 22 NOW U DO THE MATH). SO WHEN I SAW THE TITLE OF THIS MY HEART STOPED A LITTLE. I LUVE THIS STORY SO FAR AND I LOVE U FOR WRITING IT. THANK YOU.