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for My Fair Witch

by Rumpelyssa

person Queen Celestia
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear.

I hope Draco DOES punch Snape.

Nice random italics.
person firewall
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 5 - LOL loved your A/N! You certainly packed a pile of action in that chapter. You've got me going about Draco. I don't know if he is in collaboration with the "plan" or if he actually loves her. Severus is really vocal in this story as well. Love it.
person CASTLE
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWW POOR DRACO. I FEEL BAD FOR HIM. I DO HOPE HE PUTS UP A FIGHT FOR HER.
person rinnibearcg
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!!! So much fun! Thanks for another great chappie~!

Cheers-
person lisa
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow the sparks are flying now. God Severus is so yummy. but Draco is dreamy too. Whats a girl to do. I feel for Hermione. I dont think she loves him enough to marry Draco. and we have yet to see the danger Hermione is in, so that kinda counts against Severus. I hope he is vindicated soon. I would hate to see Hermione pushed into marrying. Lol I love the word exchanges between Severus and Draco. more more more please. Update soon. please.
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story due to absolute boredom, and I am hooked! I love My Fair Lady, and I believe this is the first story I have read using it (even thought every time I see the play it reminds me of HG/SS). BTW- messed up HTML in the 5th chappie ::
person beeky63
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Danger Granger! LOL. Sounds like a sixties TV show lol. Great chapter. I wonder what Draco is up to, and what is he going to do about Severus? Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work hon. Toodles.
person beeky63
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
P.S. Back to Dear Lily, whould you quit describing food, it makes me hungry,lol. God I miss British bacon "sigh". "Giggles". Toodles.
person cateye
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is better than some of the soap operas thats on during the day.You wrote that chapter so well.But I don't think Draco will fight for Hermione,I know the fan fics have always made him tuff and strong but in the books hes always seemed kind of a cute little whimp.All I know is Severus and Hermione have to be alone in a room agion soon.Maybe Severus should try and talk to Harry and find out what happened with him and Hermione,Draco might of had a hand in it.
person pickles87
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I'm glad I decided to read this. I'm enjoying your story. So will Draco bring out his wand? He seems a bit confused with Sev's comments. Does Draco have true feelings and its his Dad causing problems? Is Draco trying to protect Hermione?

I love the two gossips. They are going to be so much fun. They had to have scene her love bite..

Waiting for more. patty