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for Fallen Angels

by miku500us

person DaOnLeeSam
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i LOVE it! Update soon!
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just a smidge of constructive criticism - Hermione's eyes are brown, not green. If she got colored lenses at the spa, you might want to mention that. Otherwise, it looks like sloppy researching.
person Avanell
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my! I can't wait for more, although I like to think that she only needs to discover her own beauty. hopefully not many changes were needed physically. I don't think so :) Now, hopefully Draco isn't JUST going to discover her, but want her say, a little more?
person britt
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update! update!
person Edleen
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great 1st chapter, cannot wait for an udate!!! And as I am assuming Draco will factor into the equation...for Draco's reaction! :-)