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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"the old man"?! Well, I suppose: Snape has already reached the biblical age of 35/36 during OotP... I thought you had switched the POV abruptly to Dumbledore upon reading this.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
could you add me to your alert list? please? pretty please? and could you put in a tittle and add that its af.net? so I can actually find it after you alert me that it's been updated? please?
borne_shadow_childe/at/yahoo/dot/com
please? i love snape.
borne_shadow_childe/at/yahoo/dot/com
please? i love snape.
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow could you just leave at that!?Oy now I won't be ablt to sleep thinking aboit it...Yea I like it a lot and the poem was good too.Please update soon and when you do send me a mesage so I know you updated...I hane no idea how to do stuff like that here like in ffn.
Thanks!
Thanks!
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really great story... i can't wait to read mroe of it
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story, but the presentation is a bit sloppy. You might want to go back and fix it, make sure that your authors note isn't mixed up with the actual story. Other than that, I'm looking forward to reading more.
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, that's a promising start. Mysterious and with the right amount of darkness. *g* Your writing style is very good and smooth. It's enjoyable to read this story. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more. ^^
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue writing...I want to know how the story will develop :D
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting start and I would love to find out what happens next. Keep up the very good work.
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice and original idea.
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hope the feeling continues. i would like to read more of this very promissing tale.