rate_review Reviews

This story makes no sense. EVERYBODY is totally OOC. If Harry loves Lucius, why is he sleeping w/Draco? If he cares about Draco at all, why keep a secret like this for years? Draco didn't notice the guy he was sleeping with was pregant? Why hide the pregnancy from draco anyway? How would a kid Emily's age keep a secret like that? Draco never heard her call Harry 'mama'? Why would Narcissa a) put up with that, and b) not tell Draco, her son?

Nice fic although I think it could have been a great fic with more depth and character development. As it is it's more like an interesting plot summary. More in depth flashbacks or chapters of how Lucius and Harry got together, what lead Harry to decide to date Draco while sleeping with Lucius, if he agonized over it. How Draco's jealousy ultimately caused him to cheated on Harry as revenge and to self-destruct. Give the reader more detail on relationships between Harry and Lucius, Harry and Draco, Draco and Lucius, Harry and his daughter, as well as Draco and his half-sister instead of just glossing over them. This is not a flame I just think you have great ideas and should develope them into great stories. Keep working on it. ^_^

Very good i love my harry and lucius together and eight children brilliant. Harry always wanted a big family.And draco what a nerve calling harry a whore and there he is busy screwing another guy what a git.Harry and lucius are so hot together.I hope you are going to write more stories about my gorgeous guys as a i only read about them as a couple and definitely no threesomes.

I liked Harry/Draco pairing. But I thought Harry was being hypocritical when he got upset with Draco for sleeping around. When he's been fucking Lucius for years. Overall it was a good story.