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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
um... well obviously Hermoine as Satine, Snape as Christian, Lucius as the Duke (But make the duke like Lucius cause lucius as a complete freakish loser does not work in theory unless you can make it work) amd Zilder would be hard...Sirius black would love to own a whore house... (the thing is too it could work as a Lilly/James fic... but i am not a fan of them really, snape and granger are the way too go.)
Keep this one up... it is a great read.
Keep this one up... it is a great read.
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great post, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just found your story tonight and I'm glad I did. I am enjoying it and will keep up on it.
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great, please update soon.
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting... one of my favorite movies mixed with the land JKR created... perhaps after this you could do a moulin rouge one ;)
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's great so far...there were a few times - two I think - where you used 'She' instead of 'He'...
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hiya paine...another great chappie eh...i so love this...i am so interested in how this is going to flourish...it's off to a wonderful start...i love pretty woman...i think i wrecked 2 copies of that dvd watching it over and over...i just loved it...i like it that you are taking on a movie with ss/hg as main characters...i would so love to see them act out the scenes from the movie in hp fashion...i cannot wait for the next update...all i ask is please update and not abandon this fic...there are so many wonderful fics out there with so much potential but they are all abandoned...keep up the good work...take care...
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so far so good, im not sure if you are infringing on copy rite but i assume you checked that out first. i hope there is good character development
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great post, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. please please please please update sooni would love to read more .. later for now
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