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Ok you want a review how is this one .. I stayed up all night after you gave me the link to find that the stories are unfinished.. * Pouts* I want more or .. or ... yeah just guess what the or is . You get better and better hun and that is honesty from one writer to another. Give me more dear.....
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ps...we will rp more later sweets

I said it once I'll say it a million times, love it. I had lost this story for a little bit, but I have found it and really don't plan to lose it again. I am so glad that James finally got that sticky collar off. Please update soon ^__^

I really enjoy this series and am glad to see an update! :)

ch 1 th 10: Creative creature with nice explanations of powers, history, and attributes. Relationships between SS/LM/JP are intriguing.

Several chapters are choppy and there are some grammar issues. There are very few references to time which makes the story harder to follow. The attitudes etc between LM and Voldy & JP and Voldy are inconsistant. James maybe explained because of changing plans and cat type nature, but no rationale is provided for LM / Voldy. The chapters are short and could use some additional detail including timeline information to smooth the flow. With some of the scenes there is really no way to know if they are 10 minutes, a day, or 3 days apart.

I get the impression that this is very clear in your mind, you just need to work a little harder at making in clear to the readers.

I will be watching for more.

sad so many hits an no reviews. i like it. its an interestig plot to the harry poter series and i like it. its fun having so manythings that can be done with a story that only revolves around certain charactors. it leaves so much open for the fans to wirte. HEHEHE> i love it when big name authors leave so much open for interpretation. and taht would be a good reason for the malfys to indeed hate the potters now then wouldn't it be? i love your writing, you really are a great author. keep up the good work. yay.. lol okay later.

Can't stop saying it, Love this story.
So far I think your doing a great job at it, but if I every think of something that you could add or improve, I'll let you know about it. ^_^
Right know all I could say is keep up the great job. and Update soon. Just can't seem to get enough.

Hope this plan that James has, works out for him. I really feel sorry for him, having to go through rape again and to allowed old Voldy to touch him, ouch! wouldn't want to be him. can't wait to see how everything works out.
Hope to see a new chapter soon ^_^

This story rocks, hope to seeing an update soon

Keep up this great work. Love your story everytime more and more. Can't wait until your next chapter is up. ^_^

First I would like to say that your more than welcome, it has been my pleasure reviewing to such a great story, but like I said on my first review I really do wish these chapters were longer. But I have to say that I can't complain seeing as you are up dating as fast as you are. Keep up the Great work, can't wait till next Chap.