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for I hate myself for loving you

by roozie

person Anon
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
With a beta, this could be really good.
person pinkwands
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was hot!! I can see this being more than a one shot or am I hoping for too much? do you accept story bribes? *cough* hehehe
person Red
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this should be more than one shot, it's too hot to just end here! gimme gimme!
person Nemesis
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good fic. Kepp it as a OneShot. If you want, write another story with HG/LM or another story that is basically an expanded version of this fic. This fic is good enough to stand alone.