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ok, i'm only on chapter 8 so far..but a few things are bugging me...for one, it almost seems like you got rid of harry and ron because you didn't want to bother writeing thier characters....in other words things sound rushed and generic. :: shrugs::
The sex seemd rushed as well, I mean i don' really find it beleiveable that she got into a fight and for draco to console her he has to "make love" to her..kinda seems like that should have been done when they were both calm and not angry...'cause sex obviously does not fix everything and hte way you have it written implies that it does. Also she's pregnant 3months...and draco said something along the lines of "yes i remeber that night and can't wait for it to happen again" like they have only had sex once? Generally once a couple has sex they don't wait a few months inbetween doing it again!

Ooops, when i wrote that review i didn't realize that you had only written 8 chapters so far, i had just wanted to go ahead and post that stuff before i forgot..
Another thing about the father, Obviously he's a deatheater, but it seems like you are implying that its Voldy...which if it is she is not a pureblood..since Voldemort is a half blood.
Please don't take these reviews as me being overly critical..i'm trying to just point out things that will keep me from reading a story if i don't like the plot. You really have potential as a writer you just need to space things out a bit...try to not rush everything into a short chapter, when you get tired of writeing take a break..don't just cram it in a chapter to appease the readers.

The age old question resonates through my head as I continue to read this story: Who in the fuck is Hermione's mother's baby's daddy?? I'm enjoying the fluffiness, though.

wow i just found this story and i love it hmmm sooo how is she ever going to tell her dad about draco and the baby .... please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

wow i hope u update soon

I guess the Draco making Hermione feel better scene is a consolation to NOT knowing who the father is. Hmm...

Poo. WHO IS IT??? I'm sad now. I was excited when I saw a new chapter is up. Now I see nothing has changed since the last. *sigh* WHO????

I like it so far!

But that Cliffhanger was mean! ;-)

I haven`t read a story like this (Hermione`s pureblooded) for a long time.

Hope there will be more and longer chapters!

Elentari

Dirty dirty trick leaving us all hanging on who her father is. Blast you!

nooooooooo...you cant just leave it there. damn those who believe in cliffys. please update soon!!!