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for Her Darkest Secrets

by gryffindorblood85

schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like it!!
I can't wait for more!!!
Please continue!!!!

Byez,
Angel
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So she got fucked up the arse by a curse. Wonderful!!!!!!!! Also teen pregnancy isn't that great and something to celebrate.

I am now imagining a very pregnant Hermione not wanting to sitting down cause her arsehole and colon is on fire.
person Anon
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Ariel
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok dont wanna get overly critical but howcome they r all so happy to be peggers at such a young age? I am almost 21 and if i got knocked up it would be the work fuckin thing that could happen to me!!

I dont understand why some1 so young who wants to finish school, go to university and have a career is so happy to be pregnant. a baby would throw a spanner in the works
person zoe
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok its driving me crazy.

dont use IM speak, dont have a character say OMG actually type out oh my god. typing OMG is just lazy.

also its spelled stomach not stomace
person RD Wind
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was NOT a completed story. I am VERY disappointed that you would post it as such, then leave it that way with a "promise for a sequel".

Very disappointed indeed.

--RD
person RD Wind
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, apologies are not my strong suit -- but you deserve one -- I left a rather nasty comment about being disappointed with the ending of the story, because I had not looked at the sequel yet -- and you finished it brilliantly.

Again, I apologize for my last review!

--RD
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person ChEez PoP
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT chappie... but wouldn't ol' Voldie hav more minions around?
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

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