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for The Dark Prince

by Emowyn

person Anon
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Slasher
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this you did a wonderful job in the past chapters so far. Its has me hooked and I finally understand it now too.
person sheedy
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good plot!! I can't wait for an update. Seneco sounds almost saurian.
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Voldemort a father?! Great twist! I can't wait to read more! Update again and soon!

Tiffany
person Slasher
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far and i am already awaiting for the next chapter.
person ancientgirl
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story so far, one small tiny thing though. The teachers don't refer to themselves as Snape or Dumbledore. It's either by their title or first name. I can't see that Albus would call Severus, Snape.

I'm looking forward to reading more.
person ancientgirl
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter. I'm looking forward to finding out a bit more about Seneco and Severus' relationship. I feel sad for Seneco though. I get the feeling he doesn't have many friends, and I hope he finds some at Hogwarts.

You have a very original idea here.
person ancientgirl
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued.
person ancientgirl
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It seems that Severus and Sencio have a good relationship. I'm looking forward to reading more, hopefully a longer chapter.