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1)Yes, Slytherin
2)Yeah sure
3)Yep
4)No idea
5)Light side
6)Why not
7)Arctic fox
8) Extra powers
9)One, a raven
10)Eh

Yes Harry should be resorted into Slytherin that would give the Light a heart attack. The twins should be on Harry's side and mabye Neville. Harry shouldn't be marked, as much as he gets injured someone would notice. They all shower together too remember. Voldemort should come back in second year, but no one except Harry and the Malfoys should know until fourth year. That way it'll be close to canon. Snape should be Dark and come to an understanding with Harry. Yes Ginny should die in second year when Voldie comes back. Harry could have something like a black pheonix as a third familiar. Yes he should be super powerful. Then get back at Dumbledore for underestimating him. His animagi could be a grey wolf, a black leopard, an eagle, a basilisk, and a cat or mabye a stag like his dad. I like these questions they're fun!!

hey cool story, the dark lord should come back 2nd year ginny should die. Percy and the twins should back harry.
voldermort should be possessive of harry and his friendships harry has with others.
severus and him should be allies.
harry should be a white tiger, red belly black snalke and an albatross for his amiagus forms.

Great story, I really love it! So, I'll give you some answers to your questions now;
1. Harry should be resorted( to piss Dumbles off) into Slytherin
2. Gryfindor should be on Harry's side but not Ginny( I dson't like her being in this kind of story) And Hermione should be a bitch that everyone loves to hate.
3. Harry should be marked( it'd be super HOT!)
4. Voldie should be brought back so he and Harry can bond sooner
5. Snape should be on Voldie's side and there shiould be an eventual understanding
6. Ginny must die (Bad Weasels!)
7. I have no clue what familiar Harry should have so go balistic with it :)
8. Harry should be super powerful because that's super hot and Voldie would LOVE that ( I'm sure!)
9. Harry's animagi form should be a white tiger! Then Voldie can run his hands through Harry's thick, sexy furr...heehee :)
10. If you really need answers then you should ask questions; so go ahead if need be.
Just for your info, if this review makes me sound like a bitch I'm sorry, I just adore these type of fics where Harry goes all dark and stuff :p<3<3

hello tigerluver,

I love the way your story goes, I prefer a bit dark!harry and a not so evil as we thought voldermort because Dumbledore is just a minipulative old pervert (srry if you don't think so..).

I answered your questions, hope you can use them.

|1| No, why would Dumbledore allow that anyway, it makes the story less believeble.
|2| Well I'm not the writer, but I like the twins because they never listen to their parents (so this could be one of those times) and Neville is too sweet to be mean to anyone.
|3| I'd rather not, it's a pretty ugly thing.
|4| Wait, so the new situation can evelope, I think (don't listen to me) that voldermorts return would be too much in one year.
|5| Voldermorts side, I mean he screams 'dark' , and an understanding with Harry...I think you could make that a good read...
|6| uhhh...that depends on the side your going to put her I guess...
|7| Some creature from the forbidden forest
|8| Just have a few extra powers, so he will actually have a hard time with the situation, so he will still act/look human.
|9| A black panther, would be gorgeous with his green eyes, or maybe some bird, because he likes flying
|10| questions are not really necessary as long as the story stays believeble, even in magic standards.

I hope these answers are of any use to you, and I'm sorry if my grammar is bad, English is not my motherlanguage.

lostmysoulinthenight

Wow, i ended up with a lot of different ideas for this story. i have more than this, but i don't want to tell you how to write your story or anything. if you want to hear the rest i could email you. anyway, here are my opinions so far:

1.) Harry should definitely be resorted, but don't place him in slytherin as: one, it's way overdone, i think, and two, it would totally make dumbledore suspicious of him, esp. as he already made that comment about the dark corrupting him. i think he should be sorted into ravenclaw after he decides to turn over a new leaf and learn as much as he can in order to destroy dumbledore and his followers. Also, in order for that to work it would need to take place later in the school year, and there would need to be a *really* good reason to resort him because Dumbledore won't want to lose his weapon and will want to keep him close to Ron and Hermione. Maybe make it an issue of his safety or something.

2.) There are several ways you could go with this. If you keep Ginny alive, I think you should have her turn dark. If you decide to kill her off, then obviously it doesn't matter. As for the rest of the Griffs, I don't think they have the potential to be that dark. A lot of people have mentioned having Neville on Harry's side, but I don't think that would work. One he just doesn't seem to be DE material at all. Also, there's the whole issue with Bellatrix and his parents; I just don't see him as being able to ally himself with those that tortured his mom and dad. I mean, hello, the boy is afraid of his own shadow. I see the twins as being pretty neutral in this story, capable of going either way. I think it's too early to decide which way they'll go. The only other one I could see supporting the dark side is Lavender but not because she believes in "the cause" but because a lot of the pureblood aristocrasy has death eater ties, and she would want to be part of that aristocrasy. But then I don't really see her as a death eater, but maybe the future wife of one. Whatever you decide, only pick one or so because more than that would be noticeable. I think Ginny would be a good person to spy on Griffindor for Harry because everyone seems to underestimate her and she'll be in the thick of all the weasleys to boot.

3.) Harry shouldn't be marked because that would make him subservient to Lord Voldie. However, it would be cool if they had their own mark so they can communicate and meet up with each other. but i wouldn't place it on the left forearm because that could be too easily connected to the dark mark. ;)

4.) This depends on what you want to do with Ginny. If you decide to kill her off then he could come back in the chamber of secrets. But if you want Ginny to turn dark then LV shouldn't come back until 4th year. I think her experiences with the diary would make an excellent way for her to be introduced to the dark side of magic. It's also a way to make Ginny loyal to Harry, etc.

5.) Snape is a slytherin--he wants to be on the winning side. My vote is that Snape was never loyal to Dumbledore in the first place, but he's got an alibi on Dumbledore's side if things don't work out with the Dark Lord. When he realizes that Harry has defected to the Dark Lord's side, it only reinforces his loyalty to the dark. If they are on the same side, then yes they'll need to come to some sort of truce.

6.) No. Unless you aren't going to make her turn dark... they hell yes, let her burn.

7.) I think a phoenix would be wonderfully ironic. Make it like the opposite of Fawkes. Black feathers with blue and indigo tips. Evil!phoenix *beg* they have great healing properties etc. plus we've seen Fawkes do some nifty things like flash notes to people etc. that could be really useful.

8.) No don't make harry superpowerful. Make him Voldemort's equal. He should be strong but not unrealistically so. He is after all only a teenage boy. He needs to grow into his powers.

9.) A snake form for one of them, obviously. Definitely something with wings as he's such a natural flyer [and if he's sorted ravenclaw the house mascot would do nicely]. And then something small and inconspicous like a butterfly so that he can hide in plain sight so to speak. Whatever you decide, i think that he should only tell people he has one form and keep the others secret...well except from Dear Voldie, naturally.

10.) Not at all. otherwise, i wouldn't bother answering them ;)

Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house? "I think that he should go into Slytherin, but if you could find a way to make that the hat asked for the resorting it would be cool because no one would blame Harry and then they wouldn't know that he turned his back on them."

2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side? "Yes, I think the you should make it they are on Harry's side."

3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.)"No, I don't think there is really any point because I think only the followers get marked not the dark lords themselves."

4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year? "I think this year would be better."

5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce)"I think Snape should be on Voldemorts side, and if mabye you could put him with Lucius I would love you."

6)Should I kill off Ginny? "No."

7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.)"A shadow wolf, that he can talk to through mind link."

8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers? "Super powerful that way he can protect Voldemort and his followers and they can really long and still be younge."

9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5)" A Bassilisk, Raven, Gryphon, Badger, and a black panther. I think it would be cool if he could turn into all the animals from the differnt Hogwarts Houses."

10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter! "I love the questions I've never been able to give my insight with this much indepth that is on a story before I love it."

Bye thanks for asking hope I could help some bye.

1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house?
No, it's cliche

2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side?
Only Lavender and Patil, if you wish to lead some Gryffindors to the dark side.
The others do not have any reason to - they are either mud-, halfblood or publicly opposed to Voldemort in canon. You can depict some of them trying to save their skin in the end by running over, but Harry and Voldemort would surely discover their real thoughts. Again, it would be cliche to make Ginny, Neville or the twins dark just because. The most I can see is neutrality for Fred, George and Ginny, but they would still care for their family.

3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not?
If you want him marked then with a different mark from the dark mark.

4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year?
This year, not many fanfics have used this opportunity. Maybe Harry should steal the diary and give it to Lockhart, then no students would die and the school would stay open, Harry would certainly do all to not go back to his relatives. Or else, in the chamber when Harry goes after Ginny with Lockhart, Tom could switch the person he's drawing the life force from and incapacitate or kill Lockhart instead of Ginny. They could redirect the blame for petrifying students and everybody would think it was the fault of another wacko Defence teacher.

5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding?
Snape is on his own side, on the side that will win. If Harry wins in the end, Snape will be on Harry's side. Snape might come to understanding with Harry's power *snickers*. Or you could make this interesting and write Snape as the wily snake who dies after trying to heroically save the world from the Boy Who Lived.

6)Should I kill off Ginny?
No. Refer to answer 4)

7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.)
Why does he need three? Alright, why don't you give him a unicorn. Better yet, the giant squid!

8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers?
He should be a Slytherin. You can give him some nifty power but consider that the more powerful you make Harry, the more unbelievable your story becomes. On the other hand, some healthy lies and manipulation have never hurt the person who does it.

9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be?
Please no more than one form, if even that. It should be a flying creature as Harry is a natural flyer.
>> Pegasus was a winged horse and good flyer. It was born from Medusa. The latter was a female monster with snakes for hair. When a greek hero cut her head off, drops of her blood fell into the Libyan desert and turned into snakes.
Tamed by Bellerophon the Pegasus served as his mount during his adventures including his slaying of the Chimaera- a monster with three heads: lion, goat, and snake. When Bellerophon attempted to fly Pegasus to Mount Olympus he was dismounted by Zeus. Pegasus continued on to Mount Olympus where the gods lived. Here Pegasus spent his days carrying lighting bolts for Zeus.

1)I would like Harry to be resorted. How about Ravenclaw, he could be super smart.

2)No one should be on Harry's side

3)Harry shouldn't be marked

4)Voldemort should come back in the seconde year

5)Snape and Harry should have a truce.

6)Kill Ginny
7)He should have mythical creature as a familiar

8)Harry should be Voldemort's equal, but with a few special abilities.

9)I'm not sure. His animagus form should be cool. Maybe a black panther.

Answers to ten questions
1. Yes either Ravenclaw or Slytherin
2. Neville perhaps
3. Not equil means equil unmarked
4. Either
5. Dark
6. Yes, I can't stand clingy or overbaring people
7. Some kind of large cat. Perferably black with blue eyes .
And please don't make the same mistake every one seems
too all the great cats have round puples much like a
humans do.
8. Though super powered Harry can be fun it get old. A few
extra powers
9. A Wolf
10. Questions are fine. But you could make your chaters a little long huh ?