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for Rebirth of the Serpent

by tigerluver

person Mukuro Meki
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I trust you as the auther to make a decent decion but don't I repeat don't kill the pretty snake (the baskilask) >_< (can't spell)
person lilith
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HI, I like your story! Here some answers:

1) What should I do to Ron, Hermione and Ginny? I need help thinking up pranks.
2) Should I still have Lockhart as their DADA teacher for the year, get rid of him early or just eliminate him from the story?

Keep Lockhart and prank them with him! Make Ron sign all those fanpost and make a fool of him in duelling class. Make Hermione fall helplessly in love with Lockhart and follow him everywhere untill he hides from her! And humilate Ginny with those priceless dwarfes. How about writing her several loveletters about her hair which is just like a burning whomping willow, and her eyes which are shiny like galleons, sung in the worst way possible, while the dwarfes chase her all over the shool. They deserve it! *chuckles evilly*

3) What do you think of Draco in my story? Is he out of character too much or not enough?
Draco is just perfect.

4) Should Cedric die?
Yes.

5)Should the Basilisk in the Chamber die?
I'm undecided. On the one hand, it would make Harry a hero, which he could use against Dumbledore. On the other hand, he could fake it and send the basilik to help Voldemort. But what use would the basilik be in the shool? Its too obvious to be a secret weapon. Except if it could be shrunk somehow and become Harry's pet.

Oh, and I have an idea, but its probably ridiculous. How about making Riddle possess Ginny completely, untill she becomes Riddle. He would be female, but Voldemort and Harry would have a spy in Gryffindor and Ginny would be gone! (I hate Ginny)
person HPLV luver
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1) Harry might be able to set a boggart on them...heehee
2) Dunno
3) He's just fine
4) It should be nice to set him up with Dray
5) ...please don't let her die....
person Fallen
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First things first good chapter and please update soon.
I like Draco and think Harry and Draco would make ome good pranks together at school.
No because than it would make some problems between Voldemort and Harry But You can if you want.
I don't think so because the basilisk can look at for Harry in school.
Again Just my ideas totally up to you. LOVE YOUR STORY!!!
person Fallen
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I only answered 3,4,and5 I don't know for the others.
person Lord Potter
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story plz update soon And to Answer your questions
1 Yes he should be resorted to slytherin.
2 The twins should and maybe neville only if he gets his revenge or Maybe a truce on lestrange
3 No he shouldn't be marked maybe only as
4 This Year
5 On Voldemorts side and they should have a truce
6 Yes Plz
7 Maybe an ancromantula u know those spiders in the forest
8 super powerful
9 Maybe A type of Shadow Pheonix and maybe something like a shadow wolf
person Lord Potter
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to add one question to mine
10 nope i like ansewring them its fun update soon
person Lord Potter
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
one of my questions were cut off the mark one
3 no maybe only as voldemorts mate
person Crystalnight
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I liked the story Please keep writing

person LuciusLover
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really looking forward to reading your updates. I do think that Harry should be resorted (he really is a Slytherin at heart, at least to me); I think the twins and possibly Neville should stick by him (the only Weasleys I really think are genuine are Bill, Charlie, and the twins); Harry should not be marked (he should have the Death Eaters be marked a second time by him); Voldemort should come back this year (I really dislike Ginny); Snape should be on the dark side with Harry being his new prized pupil, along with Draco (no matter how hard I try I can never think of Snape as 'light'); Ginny has to die to bring back Voldemort (did I mention I really really dislike her); Harry's third familiar should be a shadow pheonix (I've read other fics with them and they seem the perfect familiar for a dard lord); Harry should only be slightly more powerful than Dumbledore and Voldemort (fics that have him a all-powerful are just too cheesy for words though some are rather amusing); Harry should be able to turn into any kind of snake, a shadow pheonix, and/or a thestral (snake obviously for his ability to talk to snakes, shadow pheonix because I think they are cool, and a thestral because he has seen a lot of death and violence his whole life and won't be visible to many 'light' sided individuals). I hope the suggestions help. I am also having issues with deciding where my own fiction should go.