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for Rebirth of the Serpent

by tigerluver

person Elda
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sob* Update sooner *boohoo*
Anyways:
1. I don't like slightest at all of them (Ron, Hermione, Ginny) stinking little rats! So ungrateful and all! You should just kill them or make them suffer. But ultimately; realize what wrong they've done!
2. Eliminate him (Lockhart) is my opinion. Put someone else to the picture, like senior Malfoy or something.
3. Nah... It's good for Draco to be OOC a bit, besides I want him to be good buddies with Harry.
4. Well... It's not exactly an issue wether Cedric should die or not. As long as he isn't meanie towards Harry he can freely be alive in my opinion but if he gets on the nerves I suggest you to eliminate him.
5. Naaaah... The basilisk is Voldies pet so let it live.
Please update soon! I love your story!!!
person Anon
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1)I realley have no ideas about pranks!
2)Let him be a teacher a little bit.
3)I think he
person lazycrazykitten
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1) What should I do to Ron, Hermione and Ginny? I need help thinking up pranks.
You could always have Ginny die in the chamber, or some 'mysterious' letters that have something rather nasty show up to them.

2) Should I still have Lockhart as their DADA teacher for the year, get rid of him early or just eliminate him from the story?
You can have the basilisk eat him/kill or have him 'mysteriously' disappear.

3) What do you think of Draco in my story? Is he out of character too much or not enough?
I think Draco is fine the way he is.

4) Should Cedric die?
It is only proper, but you don't have to.

5)Should the Basilisk in the Chamber die?
No I rather like the basilisk.
person Lady Voldemort
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! I think the basilisk in the chamber should stay alive! i dont know what should Happen to Hermione, Ron, and Ginny but it should show just how evil the twins can be!
person Amazon
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
2) Keep Lockhart. Its good to keep as much of the original story as possible. Plus hes fun to fuck around with.
3) I think hes a bit more father-boytoy than in the books. But okay.
4) Yes.
5) Not if Harry is going to be loyal to the Dark Lord. And its always good to have a 100+ foot serpant at your beck and call.
person Caristina(To lazy to log)
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1) What should I do to Ron, Hermione and Ginny? I need help thinking up pranks.
Have the twins turn Ginny's hair white and give her boils. (always wanted to do that to her >.<) Hermione and Ron? hmm Not to sure about them.

2) Should I still have Lockhart as their DADA teacher for the year, get rid of him early or just eliminate him from the story?
Keep him as DADA and feed him to the basilisk!

3) What do you think of Draco in my story? Is he out of character too much or not enough?
He is still well enough in character so far.

4) Should Cedric die?
Don't Kill Cedric!!!!

5)Should the Basilisk in the Chamber die?
Leave the Basilisk alive and let it be a helper to Harry.

So far so good. Keep up the goodies!
person kyoko-chan
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1) Ginny could be snake fodder. Perhaps kill Ron and Hermione off later.
2) I'd keep Lockhart, idiots are fun to kill.
3) Draco's fine.
4) Cedric... do you wanna keep the tournament or not? Is Voldemort reborn this year or not?
5) Keep the basalisk. Ginny is a nummy treat.
person megara1
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah updates!!!!
answers
die, die, he's fine, no, and no
person Reamar
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! I get to give my opinion again! (thesse are my opinionss...ignore them if you want to, I don't care)
1) *smirks evilly* you musst have Ron be attacked by sspiders...Hermione sshould have a cursse put on her that makess her forget how to read (or ssomething along thosse liness). Ginny...hmmm...I don't know of prankss for her but I really want to ssee her die. (I really don't like Ginny.)

2)I don't like Lockhart at all, but if he were to teach he sshouldn't make it through the year.

3)I think Draco iss pretty IC, he sseemss fine to me.

4)It'ss up to you. If it were up to me a lot of people would die.

5)DON'T KILL THE BASSILISSK! Pleasse don't kill it.

I can't wait for the nexxt chapter, pleasse update ssoon.
person Nita
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT!!!! LOVE IT!!!!! ssssssooooooooo cant wait for more....1)ginny should die ya no instead of being saved by harry and tom would be all young again...pranks i dont no.....2)yea sure keep him...i wonder how he should go....3)love him...and don't think he should change cause harry needs somebody else to talk to his age on the dark side ya no.....4)