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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh okay
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No, the Basalisk shouldn't die! Harry should make it his third familiar! Hmmm, Lockhart should still be in the story, and he should set the pixies on the class, but instead of Nevile getting pulled by his ears onto the chandeleir, it should be Hermione, and she falls off ripping her robes and when she falls her robes are still up there! ^^ And Harry should be re-sorted into Slytherin. And Harry's Animagus form should be a black snake with a hint of dark green in his scales when the light hits it. Update soon, thanx!

Keep at it. I like it so far.

1)Hmm resorting?...it would be hard for him to continue to pretend but if he goes to Slytherin then Dumbles would be tipped off and might "reprogram" him or something....for some reason I say Ravenclaw ><
2)Twins definately Neville not too sure Luna cuz she's so out there and just awsome
3)not the dark mark no but maybe a ritual bonding mark? to show ownership?
4)when would the LV/HP goodness begin? >> I'd say this year except that sounds rushed but on the other hand the diary is already out...Voldemort could officially come back during fourth (like Harry gets "kidnapped" or something)
5)I like Snape he's such a git....I see him looking out for himself and Slytherin to the core so...Voldemort's
6)Hehehehe kill 'em all
7)hmm owl snake (does it have to be Max? maybe something from myths?)
8) I do like Harry being superpowerful but don't like it when he becomes like a demi-god or god where can do everything cuz that's no fun so some extra powers
9)well the most common for him are either snakes or kitties... black horse with claws, something with large leather wings, humaniod with completely black eyes and greyish tinged skin with fangs 'n claws with markings on him (maybe his 'other' form, hmmm don't know ooo can he have longer hair I love him with at least shoulder length hair
10)Nah I think it's great you value input so much ~^^~

1) Ron...somehting in his food or make him think all there is to eat is something really digusting,Herm enchant her book bag so has wrong books or even make 'em random ones, genreal- well hmmm something like no impulse control, constantly hears vioces, seeing things, make 'em do random stuff each time someone says key word (like hypnosis and the good old hair coloring, swaping bodies or voices, mind messing, convincing them things that didn't happen did I'm sure the twins can think up more stuff
2) I'm up for some good old Lockhaert torture...*smriks*
3) Draco really doesn't have much a character in the books really all we know about him is that he's rich, pureblood...nothing really about who he is just general facts
4) meh he really ain't in the books much kill him torture him make him a minion or make him think he's Rambo don't care
5)NOOOOOOO! NOT ME PRECIOUS!

So story: bit rushed things come out too quickly, um no need to quote the books too much cuz well it's fandom and for most part everyone had either read the books or seen the movie...while you may want to show the other characters POV some times not necessary esp if just repeat the same convo over with minor changes, I mean if big monologue or emotional turmiol go ahead but couple changes...gets kind of tedious
Love your idea absolutely can't wait for more (real life can be a pain though - if only more hours in a day or time-turners we need bloody time-turners) I personally love longer chapters with more time between updates rather than short ones quickly posted...just my opinion so I think your off to a good start absolutely love LV/HP and always do love maniplative!Dumbledore turns dark!Harry
Oh random thought if want to build up ummm tension(?) conflict(?) maybe have Harry think about joing V but doesn't know about friends their reactions or if they'll stay with him...draw it out a bit. Oh my I just had a thought, when Hary gets the dairy of him going in more *blushes* and getting to know Tom *glazed eyes* "wait so your Voldemort?" "Yes." "Then what's taking you so long?! You'd said you'd come back from me" "...What?!" haha

hello! i just want to vote for the poll! hehehe! Ginny must die!!!!! hahahaha!!!! coughcoughcough... sorry, just want to get that out of my system. i vote for ginny to die at the end of the year but she must be bashed first along with the other traitors, i think harry would do great in slytherin especially if voldemort will return at the end of the year and pleasepleaseplease make harry superpowerful coz its tightly fitting for a dark lord right? unlike the wimp version of harry in the books. please think about it but whatever you do or decide then i'll respect your answers and keep on reading coz its a nice fic! good luck with your writing!!! Ja ne!!!

Great chapter ^^ here my answers to the questions,

1) what should I do to Ron, Hermione and Ginny? I need help thinking up pranks. Yo should make their lives a living hell ^^, oh Ginny should die in the chamber through

1) What should I do to Ron, Hermione and Ginny? I need help thinking up pranks. KILL THEM
2) Should I still have Lockhart as their DADA teacher for the year, get rid of him early or just eliminate him from the story?KILL HIM
3) What do you think of Draco in my story? Is he out of character too much or not enough? I LOVE HIM!!^_^
4) Should Cedric die? THATS SAD BUT HMMM HE SHALL BE DARK ALSO!!! YEA!!
5)Should the Basilisk in the Chamber die? NO SO PRETTY!!!

i'm glad, i always did like the twins and bill and charlie, although would they go to the point of siding with the dark lord along with harry, now that's a problem... i wonder what would happen if james and lily DID come back to life... or if they were dead to begin with? how would they react with their kid joining the dark lord, but then again, if they knew what dumbledore did to harry i'm fairly sure they would be enraged and would be happy that harry has tom, that is unless they were in the whole thing together O_O i was also wondering, how about snape? would be be a spy for dumbledore or is he pretending to be a spy but in real fact actually works for the dark lord? hum... not to mention how he would react when harry becomes friends with draco and everything, would he be nicer to the boy or would he not care? Also, i don't think that harry should get resorted, cause i'm sure that voldemort would want a spy in the "Griffin house" especially one as high profile as harry (although he might not be completly be trusted by dumbledore and all he could still get some vauable informaion and stuff like that)
great story, please please update soon! i'm looking forward to the next chapter^^

Shinigami Clara

I was wondering when you're going to update.