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for Rebirth of the Serpent

by tigerluver

person escarien
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1)Slytherin! It'd make the most sense. He's not very Ravenclaw-ish, nor very Hufflepuffly.
2)I like the idea of the twins being on his side, but not really so much with Ginny and Neville. Maybe the other Gryffindors can be split? I dunno.
3)Nah. Then it would be a bit like he was Voldemort's inferior, even if he wasn't, as Voldemort could give him pain through the mark. Besides, he's already got the scar connection, no?
4)This yearrrr! That way he could be Tom. : )
5)Dark!Snape is the best.
6)Yes! She bothers me. >.>
7)I have no idea. A cat of some sort?
8)Superly powerful is fun to read about, but neither is overly objectionable.
9)Hum. A snake? Annnnnd, uh. A spider? I'm not sure.
10)I really like the question idea! It's neat to feel like I have some input. :D
person domine
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you're doing great so far, but could you make the chapters longer? here aremy answers to your poll:
1. leave harry in gryffindor, that way no one suspects him
2. yes, every lord needs followers and harry is the only one who can turn the gryffindors
3. don't mark him as a death eater, he and voldemort should be equal
4. don't disturb the continuity you've got going, you're story so far could actually be the truth behind events in the books
5. to fit with HBP snape should side with harry
6. keep Ginny, she is pureblood and would be useful if following harry
7. a wolf would be great for harry's other familiar
8. harry should definately be super, he already seems to be
9. just a few suggestions: stag, snake, owl, lion or wolf, and can a dragon be an animangus form? that would be awesome
10. i'm not fed up with your questions, ask more, just don't forget that YOU are the author, not us

keep up the good work,
Domine
person zelda
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story I
person In2Deep
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok i liked this chappie... things went a bit diffrent this time around!

1- yes, snake pit of course
2- and all the gryffs should be behind harry except for ron and mione, but have neville and the twins be the closest to him
3- i think that harry should be marked but make it a diffrent desine and in a diffrent place like on the nape of his neck
4- im going to have to say this year just becaus he'll look that much nicer and younger LOL
5- Snape should be on the 'dark' side and him and harry should come to a truce, their friendship should be more of an outlet. (meaning that they could get along but they fight with each other because it helps them get rid of their anger and controll their emotions!)
6- no i think that ginny should have the diary untill its thrown into the toliet and then mione should have it (by this time tom should be strong enough to take controll of her mind) and then die in the chamber
7- umm... a fox kit or a wolf cub...
8- he has to be as powerful as tom but when he turns 16 i think that he should get more powers making him stronger than dumbles!
9- Panther, Phenoix (Storm or Shadow), Wolf, Black Mamba (or another snake), i dont know
10- not really i kinda like them!
person andromedao
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house?
maybe but he would have to beg the hat again not to put him in slythrin yet maybe
ravenclaw where he could be seen talking to gryf and slyths and not but in trouble
with the other kids for it
2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side?
i think the twins and neville should go dark with harry.
3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.)
yes but not with the dark mark but maybe a claiming mark
4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year?
yes but only a few ppl should know that way they can surprise bumbledork
5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce)
snape should be dark and make a truce with harry
6)Should I kill off Ginny?
yes
7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.)
a drake (mini dragon), Phoenix, or other magical creature one that chooses and
bonds to their master so others cant take them away.
8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers?
a few extra powers
9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5)
Snake, Panther, Wolf, and a magical creature or 2
10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter!
i dont mind more questions. and i really love this story
person Katonie
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. For some reason I absolutely love stories where Dumbledore tells Ron and Hermione to be friends with Harry insted of them willingly being his friend. Anyway, keep up the good work and hurry with the next chapter; I am so excited to read it!
person SpiritOfBeyond
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
eeek!!! this is amazing!! cna't wait for more! i love how the beginning is just like the book, and how it slowly detaches itself. looking forward to more!

Spirit
person Night Shade
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interessting chapter, can't wait for the nexxt.
person Nita
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very intersting...defintely cant wait for an update to this story...hope the 'bought' best friends get wat they have comin...have fun writin
-Nita
person Natasha
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi, this is a really good story.
i loved this last chapter and i am sure that i will love the rest of the story just as much!!!!
keep up the good work and hopefully you will update soon:)