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by tigerluver

person megara 1
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey great story keep going
1. yes, but not yet, maybe in a later year.
2. the twins and neville.
3. no, he should be voldemorts equal, or if you want he can be marked as voldemorts mate.
4. yes
5. dark
6. yes
7. depends
8. super powerfull
9. any sort of dark or feared creature.
10. keep asking it is fun.
person Enfant De La Mort
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi.. I kinda like this story thought it's running quite fast. But I still like it. I looking for more too..

1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house?
-I would love to see Harry being resorted. I always do.. lol. Slytherin would be nice as always. Thought Ravenclaw would be perfect too.

2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side?
-I think not. Well, maybe Neville and the rest of the Gryffindors, but not Ginny and not the twins.

3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.)
-Not.

4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year?
-Wait until the fourth year.

5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce)
-On Voldemorts side. He and Harry must come into some sort of understandig if it is only a uneasy truce.

6)Should I kill off Ginny?
-Yeah please.

7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.)
-Dunno. Talking spider would be cool.. :P lol

8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers?
-Nah.. Few extra powers would be nice.. I think..

9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5)
-I've always seen Harry as an wolf..

10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter!
-Nope. Ask as much you like. :P

That would be all this time. Up until next question session :P
person Kitiara Starfire
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok here goes
1) no to resorting leave him in gryffindor so no one knows he is bad
2) ginny, neville, and the twins with him rest stay good, would be too hard to believe all gryffindor went bad (sirius def on his side)
3) no mark easier to spy and play their savior
4) wait or come back without killing ginny and remain hidden
5) Snape should be on Harry's side
6) NO don't kill her she should be a joint love interest for the dark lords
7) maybe a wolf in the forest
8) extra powers (wandless magick a def)
9) snake, wold, stag
10) love the questions

looks good so far
person Reamar
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay...I'll ansswer, though thesse are only my opinionss and I'm not expeccting you to do thesse.
1)Yess, Sslytherin (I know it'ss not original but I like it).
2) The twinss, and Neville only. Have ssome sside with Weassle and Mudblood sso there can be feudss.
3)Don't have Harry marked.
4)I'm not ssure...I think he sshould only come beck partially thiss year and then causse a big uproar in 4th year.
5)Have Ssnape sside with Harry.
6)Kill Ginny.
7)Hmm...what about a Chinese fox? (The Chinese Fox looks like a typical fox but has a life span between 800 and 1000 years. The Chinese fox has special powers, when it strikes it tail on the ground it can ignite fires, the Chinese fox can also see the future and it is a polymorph (can change its shape). The Chinese fox is a trickster and a sly animal it's though to be a bad omen to see such an animal.)
8) That'ss a tough one. You could alwayss sstart him out with a few powerss and when he iss a partner with the Dark Lord he can become ssupremely powerful. It could alsso be a 'sstrong emotion' unlock thing.
9) *smirk* You know at leasst one iss a ssnake, a Basilissk maybe? Ravenss are awssome too.
10) I'm ok with the quesstionss and I'd be fine with more nexxt chapter.
person Guest
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think that some of the Gryffindors should be on Harrys side, in most fics thet are all so black and white - quite boring to read, and it
person zoe
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter I like how you have brought back the snake "max" from book 1.
as for your question poll
1)I dont think that Harry should be resorted he could be a valuble spy if he's in Gryfindor,
If you have to resort him my vote would go to Slytherin
2)I think The twins and Ginny should be on Harrys side, and mabey Semeus and Dean. But I realy cant see Neville turning to the dark side and still playing the roll of good little clumsy gryfindor.
3)My vote go for Harry being marked is No, Harry and Voldemort should be on a equal level, and If Harrys marked it gives the impresion that Voldemort is he's suppirior, and Harry is just a Death Eater with many privledges.
( And any way Harrys already marked by Voldemort His scar)
4) If Voldemort comes back in the 2nd year its easier to give him his 16 year old body, while if he comes back in the 4th year hell be all old
5)Im netural about Snape
6)Well if Ginnys going to be on Harrys side then my votes going to be keep her alive, but if you get vast numbers telling you she should be against Harry then kill her off
7)For Harrys 3rd Familiar, you could have fawlks. You could have Harry as the heir to Gryfindor and Fawlks could have been his familiar and is supposed to be passed on to the next generation, but Dumbledor stolle him and has him under some sort of enchantment that makes im incapable of going to Harry.
8) Super powerfull beings kind of spoil storys in my opinion, Harry should be more powerfull than most wizerwds( cough Dumbledor cough ) but he shouldnt have unlimited god like powers.
9) Animugus forms.... Stag, Snake, Panther, Eagle, Unicorn ( they should all be black with vivid green eys, and a small lightning shaped scar )
10) If you want you can keep asking questions wether or not Im bothered to answer them will be up to my mood for the day

Hope you update soon
person jenn
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
definitly Ginny and the Twins should stand by Harry. Bring Voldy back asap!!! Love the story
person death906
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house? Yes. Slytherin or Ravenclaw.
2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side? Not all the gryffindors maybe Seamus and the like. Yes to Ginny, the twins, and Neville. How about Charlie and Bill too.
3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.)Nah. Let HIM mark others with a special mark.
4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year?
5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce) Voldemorts. ANd a good friendly understanding.
6)Should I kill off Ginny? Nah.
7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.) A chimera, dragon, or a wolf.
8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers? Make him equal too or a little more powerful tahn Voldemort and Dumbledore.
9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5) Dragon, Basilisk, Black fire phoenix, and Griffin.
10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter! No and keep up the good work! Ask more questions!
person artemyl
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1)No, since I doubt he would want Dumbledore to be more suspicious of him than need be, and resorting may very well do that since the hat originally did want him in Slytherin. But, eh, i don't really care...
2)My thought on this is twins on harry's side, Neville maybe neutral(since I really can't see him as a DE...), and Ginny against
3)No, since they are supposed to be equals.
4)This year would be cool, but it may be better to wait.
5)Snape and Harry make a truce.
6)Yes!
7)That's a bird and a snake.... so... maybe a wolf? or a fox, yeah, they're cute li'l buggers... hmmm... maybe something of the magical variety... So, maybe a young seven-tailed fox, or kumiko as i've heard them called, so maybe it'll have two tails instead since it'll be somewhat young... that'll be over 50 years i think...
8)Please, please, please, no super!harry. Yes, he's supposed to be more powerful than the average wizard, but don't take it overboard like i've seen so many authors do. I've only seen a couple of authors pull off a good story with that and only because they made Dumbledore and Voldemort about that powerful also. So, just make him stronger than the average wizard and give him a couple of extra powers.
9)I've always seen him as an avian of some sort since he is a natural flier. So I'd say: gyrfalcon, just for the hell of it: a basilisk, a roc, a wyvern
person Rayven
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another update. I love this story. Here are my answers for your poll. Can't wait for your next update!!!! Peace, Love and Chocolate, Rayven
1)maybe, I always like when harry gets resorted but then there's something to be said about a snake in the lion's den. and he can keep an eye on the lying gryffindorks.
2)No, I think the Gryffindors are better being the bad guys. Except maybe Neville. I like Draco/Neville pairings in these types of stories.
3)I don't think that really matters. As long he's a dark lord it irrevelent.
4)Yes, but keep it a secret. Have Ginny obliviated when Tom/Voldemort returns, or kill her.
5)I think Snape should be on the dark side. And should become like an uncle/mentor to Harry.
6)Probably or obliviate her in the end.
7)Maybe a raven or cat.
8)Yes,keep Harry as powerful as Voldemort.
9)Panther, Wolf, Snake, Black Owl, and (up to 5)
10)It's up to you, I like being able to give suggestions on what'll happen next.