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by tigerluver

person Rosa
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a really great story. these are my answer for the questions u asked:
1.Yes, Slytherin. 2.no i think just ginny, the twins, and neville. 3. Yes. 4.This year. 5.Voldemorts side. and yes they should. 6.No please don't. 7.A black phoneix 8.Super Powerful 9.Snake. 10. it is up to you, i think its cool that u do though.
person lazycrazykitten
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house? If he does it would have to be Slytherin.
2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side? Maybe only the twins and possibly Neville. I really don't like most of the other Gryffindors.
3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.) If he is it shouldn't be as obvious as on his arm.
4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year? Maybe merge his soul into his younger version in this year. But maybe not have it become public knowledge until 4th.
5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce) You can really go either way and have him really up with Dumbledore or grudgingly admit to actually being on the dark side. It honestly doesn't matter.
6)Should I kill off Ginny? Yes. I really don't like her all star struck attitude. Off with her head!
7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.) Maybe something more magical like a Pheonix, but you might want a four legged animal and not a bird (so Hedwig doesn't get jealous!)a wolf would be pretty cool. And it is different.
8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers? I'd personally like him to be above average but not super.
9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5)Snake is always a given. But since owls are birds of wisdom, and he does apparently learn from his mistakes....yeah and owl would be nice.
10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter! Not really. I mean if people don't like the questions they don't have to answer them. You don't even have to read our responses if you don't want to. Anyway I do love your story no matter how you write it I'm sure it will turn out fine. Happy writing.
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house?
Yes,Slytherin
2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side?
No way to all ,but the twins and neville.
3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.)
no too suspisius.
4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year?
He should come back this year looking like tom.
5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce)
Snape should be on the dark side. Harry will need his help to learn occlumency.
6)Should I kill off Ginny?
Yeah. I hate Ginny.
7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.)
He neads a mate for either hedwig or Max
8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers?
Super Powerful.
9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5)
Deffinatly a snake and if he has mor than one he should be a stag becouse everyone would expect that.
10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter!
What are your plans with serius and remus because i love them.
person anne_rose_teen
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house?
Yes,Slytherin
2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side?
No way to all ,but the twins and neville.
3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.)
no too suspisius.
4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year?
He should come back this year looking like tom.
5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce)
Snape should be on the dark side. Harry will need his help to learn occlumency.
6)Should I kill off Ginny?
Yeah. I hate Ginny.
7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.)
He neads a mate for either hedwig or Max
8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers?
Super Powerful.
9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5)
Deffinatly a snake and if he has mor than one he should be a stag becouse everyone would expect that.
10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter!
What are your plans with serius and remus because i love them.
person Nita
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SO WANT MORE!!!!! 1)hmm me no no bout that one...2)the twins, neville,maybe bill and charlie...3)no death mark but maybe a tatoo to signify somethin...4)i think maybe 4th...5)dark side totally...6)yea me think so all harry needs are the slytherins and the one who i want changed...7)hmm i like a wolf or something like one...8)super powerful or the same powers as voldemort...9)snake, panther, hmm dont know wat else will have to think...10)no not fed up sure ask more me dont care...have fun writin
-Nita
person Kali Magi
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1)Yes, Salazar's house... duh?
2)If you don't resort Harry make the Lions into his deatheaters.
3)If he is marked then if should be diff. b/c he isn't a lowly deatheater... maybe in a differnt place?
4)I would prefer this year so I can have more sex :-D
5)Snape should be on Harry's side and a truce would be cool.
6)Kill her to bring back Tom.
7)A bird like a raven or a phoenix.
8) BOTH but at equal pwr w/ Tom.
9)Some sort of snake, some sort of cat, something that flies, something cute and cuddly for Tom to play with, and something that swims.
10)No one must always ask questions to get reviewers to add input.

This is great so far keep it up.
person person
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1. Yes, he should be re-sorted to Slytherin.
2. All the Gryffindors EXCEPT FOR the twins should be against him. Fred and George should side with him.
3. No marking.
4. This year! XD I'm so impatient.
5. An uneasy truce.
6. Yes! Yes you should.
7. He should have a gecko. Why? Because I love gecko's.
8. He should be super powerful AND have a few extra powers. XD
9. A snake (obvious), a panther, and some form of cool black bird.
10. The questions are a good idea. Yay for reader feedback!
person cobalt Tink
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see Harry resorted. You can put him in Slytherin, but that's what everyone seems to do. You can put him in ravenclaw. If I remember my reading right the ravenclaws never have classes with the Gryfindors. I hope to read more of your story soon
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1)Do you want Harry to have a resorting, if yes to which house?
Yes WE Think He Should Be Resorted (Red Does Nothing For His Complection) To Slytherin Or Ravenclaw
2)Should Ginny, the twins, Neville and the other Gryffindors (except Ron and Hermione) be on Harry's side?
Ginny-No The Twins-Yes Neville-Yes(But He Gets Resorted To And Goes To Ravenclaw {WE Don't Know Why}) Rest Of The Lions-No
3)Do you want Harry to be marked or not? (It doesn't really matter he'll still be a dark lord.)
No He Should Get His Own Mark And A Different Name For His People (ie.LV Has Death Eaters Dumbles Has His Flaming Turkeys)
4)Should Voldemort come back in this year or wait until the 4th year?
We Thought This Year Would Be Good But We Want To See How Portray Sirius
5)Which side should Snape be on? Should he and Harry come to an understanding? (though it would only be an uneasy truce)
We Have Always Loved Sev On The Dark Side
6)Should I kill off Ginny?
YESSSSSSSSSSSSS
7)What other familiar should Harry have? (He needs three and so far he has Hedwig and Max.)
A Kitsune (Fox Demon[3 Tails To Start]) Or A (Shadow) Wolf Cub
8) Should Harry be super powerful or just have a few extra powers?
Both We Think He Should Have A Magical Creature Inheritence(Part-Vampire, Dark Veela, Demon [Fox, Wolf, Dog, Snake, Neko(Cat) Etc...], Etc...)
9)What should Harry's Animagus form or forms be? (up to 5)
A Snake (Of Course), A Shadow Wolf (An All Black Wolf With The Power To Move Soundlessly Through Solid Objects And Travels Through The Shadow[Something Of Our Own Creation It Belongs To Our Own Mythical(SP?) Creature Stories You Can Have It If You Like]), A Dark Phoneix, A Panther With Wings(Should Be A Different Color Then The Body And Retractable), A Blood Fox(A Dark Red Fox With 1 Tail For Evey Special Power They Acquire[Another One Of Our Creations My Favorite One In Fact You Can MAke You Own Powers Or If You Want The List Of The Powers They Get Email Us]
10)Are you fed up with these questions? Tell me if you want me to ask more next chapter!
No We Love To Help And We Just Came Back To AFF.Net So Are Getting Back Into The Swing Of Things And We Are Gonna Beta For Some People On Other Sites So If You Ever Need Help Or Just Some One To Proof Me And My Brother Major In Writing :)
person Noeturna
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1)I think it would make more sense if he stayed in Gryffindor, to stay below the radar, as it were. Though I wouldn't mind a resorting either, as then he'd be more like to make 'real' friends, as it were. As for house...ravenclaw or slytherin?

2)I like the idea of the twins being on Harry's side... as for the rest, I don't much care either way, thought I think it would be a little out there to make ALL the other gryffindors on his side.

3)Hm... I don't know, both have a certain appeal. Maybe marked but have it be a little original? *shrug*

4)This year. I'm all about impatience! ^_~

5)Voldemort's, and yes. I just adore Snape.

6)If you want.

7)Um...no idea on that one. Uh, maybe something unusual like... I don't know... something weird. Ha, that was useless.

8) Somewhere in between super powerful and a few extra powers. Quite powerful, but not... overly powerful.

9)I've recently had the crazy idea of making Harry be like... an evil Phoenix. A black phoenix. *shrugs again*

10)Nah, it's fun!

I hope none of my answers were too crazy! (Well, except the obviously crazy ones ^_~)
Take Care, and I greatly look foreward to reading the next chapter ^_^