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for Midnight Stroll

by Yaoiluver

person Amessis
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done! That was very hot- I liked how Draco decided that he wanted everyone to hear Harry's screams.
person lita
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! It's just too cute! Please update ASAP!
person Freak
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey if they have a problem with it who cars. Draco and Harry kissing is HOT!
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can't wait for chapter 5!
person LOOK AT MY DING-A-LING-LING
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story :D
And I love the fact that you're updating so quickly!
keep it up! Cant WAIT to see what happens next!
person avihenda
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cute little story. :-) But actually I loved the idea you had with the first chapter and just keeping it a one shot. That would have had me wondering for weeks what happend and come up with multiple scenarios, just to go back and read it again. lol
but then I*m probably just the self torture kind ;-) keep writing
person anne
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM

Hey there :) i really like chapter 4 and especially the ending of it, very sweet! hope you'll update soon and hopefully some hot harry/draco action :P

person niamh
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh dear god PLEASE dont write anymore! that was horrible. its not even well written!! its an over used plot line, bad writinf, everyone is out of character, jesus, could you fuck it up anymore then u already have?
oh jesus please dont answer that.

please, do us all a favor and NEVER attempt to write EVER again.
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why so secretive? What are they going to tell them? Ron and Hermione told the Gryffindors that? And Ginny went along with it? Was the whole Weasley family in on it? What about the twins? Harry helped them start their store. Were they using him too? Draco beat up Ron! Hahahaha! Can't wait for chapter 4! Too wonderful!
person Amessis
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done! I'm glad Ron & Hermione got what they deserved!