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aww that is so cute
they are so good together

Awww! Chapter 8 please! Harry was scared that Draco had left him. I'm glad Draco got back in time. A huge misunderstanding could have happened instead.

I like the story please cont.

that was so sweet

I agree that the first chapter left too many questions to be complete in itself. But you have a lot to learn. I do think you should continue writing if you enjoy it, but please study the works of the authors you most like to read and try to learn from them. Your story line was simplistic, the characters unbelievable, and the dialogue... If I were to guess, I'd say this was written by a 13 or 14 year old - 15 tops. There were portions that showed promise, though, so keep trying. Just try to put a little more thought into your characters instead of being carried away by the romanticism.

The first part was AWWWWW!!!
And the shower part as YUMMY!!

Great chapter.... really good!
Can't wait for more
chow for now!

Aww! They love each other! I can't wait for chapter 7! More please!

wow O.O i love you and want to have ALL your children!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok so i tried to review yesterday but my computer froze!!!!! so now i review, wow how can you update this fast!!!!!! i always bow down to my god *bows down* please update soon!! please and thank you

next chapter please :-)
that was a fast update.