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for Midnight Stroll

by Yaoiluver

person SiOuXsiESiOuXFaN
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow um i dont no wat 2 say...that was really good but...the language was just totally porno. There, I got it out. Could you maybe make yur future stories more romantic and less porno? I like gay fiction but...i don't no. That's just wat I think.
person blablabla
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey this was good and to niamh GO FUCK YURSELF BITCH THIS STORY WAS GOOD. overcritical little snipe. ne ways keep up the good work

oh and on a side note maybe niamh should change her name to somethin else cuz she is disrespecting my irish heritage a bitch does not deserve a celtic name. but thats just my opinion.
person aenfnsdfn
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very cool...but remember that everyone is british so they wouldn't say faggot cuz a fag is a cigarette over in da UK. and faggot...they just dont use that. u coulda used wanker or somethin (haha i luv that word).

but the ending was good. poor harry...he'll pull thru. :)
person aenfnsdfn
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww cute ending. keep writing more!
person Noeturna
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha, cute ^_^
person sunsparked
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! i love it. its so sweet.
person anon
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* i love midnight strolls....^_^
person anne
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and anyone who says they don\'t is crazy! I wanted to review because, as an auther, i know how important it is.
person Obsidian Phoenix
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it and am looking forward to more hot shower scenes....I had to bite the heel of my hand not to moan out load.....god that was hot
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person lita
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its alright!! I can wait but I hope the wait won't be to long!!