schedule
June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it great and i love it and it should continue whenever you can put it into words!
schedule
January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
no no no no no no no no no no no i refuse to acknowledge that this is a one-shot goddamn it! pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease create more chapters!! Pleasey pleasey please!
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think the story is good. There are some spots that did to be worked on. But, good ^__^.
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
need to
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww how beautifully done. Its perfect. I love it. But it makes me want more. I want a complete story. Plz do more plz plz plz.
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
god this is a great story!!!!
please copntinue
Jadlyn
please copntinue
Jadlyn
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic! It was a perfect one shot but you could have turned this into a novel as well! Wonderful!