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Ohhhh you know in all the "musings" of what and how Harry will be when everything is all said and done this possiblity is always the hardest to read. But it is written so nicely. Hopefully this Harry will find his peace at last

Not too bad... but you ought to try to include more details and more angst. This is way too short for any real emotion to show. Put more detail, more feeling into it, and way more description (like why would ron and herm not include him? did their parents die because of him? or some other reason... remember, ron and hermione are in the war together with harry... did harry make a mistake that caused the death of somebody ron and hermione cared about? the death of ginny? or another weasley?), and why not include how he bought the vial, his feelings when buying the vial, the emptiness, the never ending sorrow etc.

You have the potential to be a good author, just keep practicing. e-mail me at IcePrincess89@gmail.com if you need any other pointers on any other stories.

I hope this isn't just a one-shot, I would like to see the reaction of everyone if he does go through with it successfully. Its an interesting start out. Hope to hear from you soon!

You could have him come back and haunt Hermione and Ron.

Please don't let this be a oneshot. It doesn't even have to be a romance fic, just one more chapter. Please?

awww that was very sad and well written u definatly have talent when it comes to writing.

flame? how could anyone flame this. update soon!

Wow that was really great you could really feel his pain and sorrow. Your story really reminds me of when I as depressed and suicidal it chills me a bit but it's beautiful in many ways