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I don't think I've reviewed this fic yet--and I don't know why! This fic is so heart-breakingly amazing, I love it! I think I've cried over just about every chapter. But this last chapter... *lip quivers* God I feel so bad for Sev, you really do such an amazing job at making the reader want to love him and feel for him. He's so lost and lonely and clueless when it comes to Harry--and Harry is just as bad! GAH! *hugs Sev and Harry--and you!* Hee, I can't wait for the next chappie.

Great update, poor Severus. Looking forward to the conversation between Dumbledore and Severus and how Severus will react. Update soon.

Thank you for the little review and I surely cannot wait to see what happens, poor Severus, missing Harry, but that is good that he comes out and tells them, that he is in love with Severus. :D Cannot wait for the next upload and find out what happens.

^_^ I loved this chapter! I'm so happy that Severus was finally able to admit he loves Harry!... even if Harry was sleeping when he did so. It's progress! And now I can't wait for the next chater!

I really love this wonderful story. I've only just started reading this ship and have been surprised by the high quality writing in most stories. Yours is certainly included there. I can't wait to see how Albus manages Severus during his Harry free week. Please keep up the great work.

That Voldemort/Snape scene was amazing. Definetly one of the most original and well written scenes I've read on AFF. I can't even beleive it! For some reason I'm not really thinking "poor Harry" very much. I mean... I know I should be, but my mind keeps saying "poor Snape" instead. Interesting... very interesting. On to the next chapter!

HA!! I knew it! I knew that my Sevey couldn't really be evil! Hoorah! You're character development is so good! I don't think I've never seen a better written Snape. Voldemort being so powerful that Snape actually starts to beleive his own role. That is so brilliant. I'm totally obsessed with this story now. I'm almost sure it's the best one I've read on AFF.

chapter 24: Hahaha "Happy Christmas you rotten jerk" how funny! That was very nice chapter to contrast with the intense depressingness of the others. OH! Also, I really like how involved Dumbledore is in this story, you don't see that too much.

Alright, so I've been reading this story all evening, and I must say it's quite brilliant. I was very impressed with fact that you were able to set up such an engaging and well written story, even with out putting any smut in it for several chapters (something that I cannot really do, ergo my story is like... pornoworld...). I think you've written the characters pretty well, if Harry is just a little whimpy. Furthermore, the story moves at a decent pace and is unrepetitive. However, I just read chapter 15 and I had a couple things to say. Firstly, I thought the way you put 'ssssss's in many of the words during the parsletongue section was... well... really rediculous. I mean, it's not like parsletongue is just english with the s' emphasized. I just thought "What on earth?!" and it took me out of the story. Also this doesn't make sense:

Chapter 18: This is like... the most dysfuntional relationship ever. V. good chapter. The "Good, you're a monster Severus" line was v. good.