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this is soooo goood. please update soon, I'm begging you!

Eloquent.

I request that you add me to your update list- If you have one. I am unable at this time to pursue your fictional work on my own without aid, as I am in a compramisable internet situation at the moment. I have to say though, that the loss of 3 hours delegated sleeping time was not a waste.

If you could send an e-mail to the address melodydemort@yahoo dot com, along with a link to the new chapter, I would be very thankful. The depth of character on all sides was suprisingly thourough. I felt drawn into your imaginative embrace, and for several hours, spent my time between copying and pasting your work so that i could read without hindering the dial-up computer I was on, to attempting and failing to find a comfortable position in this blasted high-backed wooden chair.

If you cannot take the time to inform me of your updates, I shall understand, but mourn the loss of ability to read the end of your fictional masterpiece.

Sincerely Yours,

M. Gilliat

Loved it!!!!

helllooooooooooooooooo... u know the douj is progressing... I'm finally over Cho's part... I' taking this long, because I just draw a page day after day... I'm creating a blog, then I'll show it u... thanks fpr all... lov u :D

Only four more? *cries a little*
Oh well... all good things must come to an end I supose, and ending it soon is better than having it go on forever and having the plot suffer.
Though... it does seem like there's a lot of things to take care of in just four chapters. Hm... Well anyway... Hermione's such a sweetheart!
I love her in this story (as much as she's in it). Ron's being a bit of a butt... but it could be worse I suppose.
Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great update, want more Severus and how it went with Dumbledore. Looking forward to the sequel, hated to see that this one was ending soon.

Loves it and can't wait for more!

Yes please! Do write a sequel!
I suppose (and perhaps I suppose wrong...)at least I hope that Snape and Harry will reach some kind of agreement at the end of your story so it would be so interesting to see them fight Voldemort side by side...
I can think of so many angsty developments that can rise from that: I guess any relationship must be difficult in times of war but a relationship with a spy!!! Except of course if you chose to make Voldemort aware of Severus treason? Or perhaps there might be an ambiguity in that respect: what if Voldemort set a trap?
Well anyway! please keep up the good work and update soon! I can't wait!!!

I think the story is coming along really well. Also a sequal to this would be quite good and intresting....lol....toodles......

Hm... that chapter felt very bridgey. Don't get me wrong, those sort of chapters are important (you have to set up the story obviously), but when one is reading the story with long gaps between chapters, a bridge chapter is a little disappointing. I did, however, really like the revelation of Snape's gift being a pensieve. I also liked how you described the pensieve, how it was made, and how the "silvery stuff" takes a lot of time. It was very J.K. Rowling-esque (I don't generally think that you emulate her very much in your writing style, but you did at this point). So often, fanfiction writers attempt a good magical explaination and, more often than not, I find myself being very pretentious and thinking things like "Oh that's just rediculous, nice try, but you clearly can't come up with something creative that would be in the Harry Potter stories." However, you really pulled it off! I applaud you.
Can't wait for the next chapter.