rate_review Reviews

So gooooooooooooood! I love your Severus, is in perfect caracther, update as soon you can!

Well, I\'m going to be as boring as the rest and say \'please hurry and post more\'. I\'m having so much fun reading this.
One beta point:
*Remembering that nothing he thought was no longer private,* should be \'remembering that anything he thought was no longer private\'. You had a double negative, which cancels itself, if you follow me. Umm well, I think I know what I mean, hope you do.
Take care and thanks for your hard work!

Yes! Love this story, just love it! I like how you did Harry's memory. Snape's reaction was very well done, as well as his slight...erm...'slips' leading to some buried secrets from our Potions Master, perhaps? Can't wait for more, and some Snarry action!
Lots of love,
Draven Wolfe (Crowley on AFF)

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i like it hope to reas more soon

Awesome! I really love this fic, so please continue! I can't wait for the next update!
~Draven Wolfe (Crowley on AFF)

would you put me on an update list or something? e-mail me the link when you put up a new chapter? i really like how this story is going. i'm also guessing that there is something about mpreg in the book dumbles gave harry. anyway- please e-mail me when you update. i do like this story so far. it actually has plot!

great story, I really like how it is coming along, questioning Harry is great! I particularly think Snape is in character.

A very interesting story and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work and please update soon.

hmmm....
Nice
*snuggles*