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From 'whorthless little shit' to being nice to house elves. I really tryed and maybe understood that power impersonalizing person belittling whoever comes across his way you wrote in first chapters. I really thought that there was something beneath that comment about darkness filled eyes, if I remember correctly. Well, there's charming intelligent chess-player Snape. Again. Bah.
And, if I'm not mistaken, there was one little moment. Potter read book on Dark Arts and found it fascinating. Next day he says he understood naught. I know I'm prejudiced - I hate dumb and clueless Potter. But how dumb can one be to not comprehend anything and be fascinated by this? Then, some days later after he supposedly read his Occlumency book he absolutely doesn't know what to do when Snape attacks his mind - he doesn't know about that link and how to push it et cetera. Question: what was in that book?
And that question about why do I have to know something about Dark Arts just killed me.
As you can see I have mixed feelings. I'm soaking in your idiot Potter. I'm dripping with his snivels by now.

So Snape did not talk with Dumbeldore ? I really love your story.

I congratulate you on the snarkiness of your Snape. When he's that much of a ba***** I don't know how Harry could have anything to do with him. But as you pointed out, he has no one else. A well rounded plot so far! You've also set the stage for Herm. to be his 'confidant' and the usual Ron blow up. You never said, did Snape go to Dumbledore with his info??? Is he going to encourage, or discourage him?

Aah! This is one of my favourite fics right now^.^;. Keep going!

Nice...real nice. I like this story, I hope you update soon!

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It was good and it's getting better ! I love your soooo sexy Severus.

Very nice. I'm dying to know what happens next^.^.

Considering this is your first fic, I\'m really enjoying it. Poor Harry, the less girls he wants to snog the more he gets. And Snape keeps seeing it.
At last Harry\'s realising his true feelings for Snape though. I want to see how that develops.

Boy, is your Snape an *ss! I can't understand how someone could fall for another who treats them so badly. Very interesting story! Please continue!!!!

aaaaaaargggghhh! post!