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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG...I LOVE this story. It is the best Harry/Snape pairing I have read yet. I love it. I love it. I love it. The characters seem so alive and right. How they get into a relationship just fits. I could not stop reading. I read it all the way through last night and could not think of anything else. The sex is HOT! and the story just rips at my heart. Please continue. I sincerly want to know what happens next and I cannot wait for the next chapter. Do not change a thing. The writing is incredible. I just hope there is a happy ending, but a sad one is okay too. It almost feels like it will end badly. I can wait to see how it ends.
~hungs~
~hungs~
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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. the plot twists were like hairpin turns for a couple of the most recent chapters! snapes set of memories shocked me, dumbledore's explination and memory were shocking in a completely opposite way, and then the confinement in the dungeons for, what, 10 days? two weeks?!!! i cant wait for the next few chapters. hurry!!!!
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello there!
I've come across your story and somehow just couldn't stop reading. Hours later, it must have been about two in the morning, I finished the last chapter. But it was worth every minute, even with only five hours of sleep left. Keep on writing! I can hardly wait for the next chapter...
I've come across your story and somehow just couldn't stop reading. Hours later, it must have been about two in the morning, I finished the last chapter. But it was worth every minute, even with only five hours of sleep left. Keep on writing! I can hardly wait for the next chapter...
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EEEEIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
Absolutely wonderful. I am SO loving Snape. Poor Harry, you gotta admitt. He must be
hurt by Snape, like, MAJOR. I can't to read the next chapter. Thanks so much for writing this.
Excellent!!!111!!1!one
Absolutely wonderful. I am SO loving Snape. Poor Harry, you gotta admitt. He must be
hurt by Snape, like, MAJOR. I can't to read the next chapter. Thanks so much for writing this.
Excellent!!!111!!1!one
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the fic, please update again soon...kick ass job!
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely wonderful! I'm not done reading it yet, but I have to pause my reading and I just had to leave a comment. I love this direction this story is going. Not only is there some Snarry!Smutt, but there's a plot and soon-to-be-romance and I can't wait to continue reading.
I think the characterizations are very nice. I also notice that your chapters (so far @ chpt 10) mostly center around the Occulmency lessons or some of Harry's downtime in between, but that's perfectly fine. You cut the clutter and go straight to the point, yet still manage to describe Harry's and Snape's feelings thoroughly. I don't Snape is any bit OOC. I think you take him further than what is revealed in the HP books, and you do so in a favorable light, which makes him so much more attractive!! I don't mean you're making up stuff about him, like trying to make him sound more glorious than he already is --- in fact, I think you do his character justice. He is described so unfavorably in the books, but he's so gorgeous in your story. I think Snape's talents are so undermined - no one really cares to truly understand the type of man he is and how he became that way, but you do!!! From my understanding, Occulmency and Legilimency are not easy, so its only natural that Snape should appear so powerful (Dumbledore would be drop dead to-die-for is he were 60 yrs younger). He's impassive most of the time, and yet so passionate!!
As for your Harry, I love him. heehee. Maybe its because I have a thing for needy, horny boys, but it seems to fit his character. I tired of seeing him as some sort of overlord. All he did was freakin survive several Lord Voldie encounters!! He may come off as arrogant in the book, but underneath all that is someone vulnerable who needs some reassurance. It's only natural that he is attracted to Snape in your story. Harry likes the comfort and power Snape provides him, not to mention he's going into teenage-heat. hahah. But yeah, even though he might appear OOC to major Harry fans, he's perfect for this type of story. He's not too mushy, but he's not too defiant, either.
Anyway, this is a wonderful story. I was surprised to see that you had started this at the beginning of the year and had 22 chaps up already. damn. I just hope you keep up the steady updates and finish this soon! Though I admit, I'll be sad to see it end.
ack. long review...
I think the characterizations are very nice. I also notice that your chapters (so far @ chpt 10) mostly center around the Occulmency lessons or some of Harry's downtime in between, but that's perfectly fine. You cut the clutter and go straight to the point, yet still manage to describe Harry's and Snape's feelings thoroughly. I don't Snape is any bit OOC. I think you take him further than what is revealed in the HP books, and you do so in a favorable light, which makes him so much more attractive!! I don't mean you're making up stuff about him, like trying to make him sound more glorious than he already is --- in fact, I think you do his character justice. He is described so unfavorably in the books, but he's so gorgeous in your story. I think Snape's talents are so undermined - no one really cares to truly understand the type of man he is and how he became that way, but you do!!! From my understanding, Occulmency and Legilimency are not easy, so its only natural that Snape should appear so powerful (Dumbledore would be drop dead to-die-for is he were 60 yrs younger). He's impassive most of the time, and yet so passionate!!
As for your Harry, I love him. heehee. Maybe its because I have a thing for needy, horny boys, but it seems to fit his character. I tired of seeing him as some sort of overlord. All he did was freakin survive several Lord Voldie encounters!! He may come off as arrogant in the book, but underneath all that is someone vulnerable who needs some reassurance. It's only natural that he is attracted to Snape in your story. Harry likes the comfort and power Snape provides him, not to mention he's going into teenage-heat. hahah. But yeah, even though he might appear OOC to major Harry fans, he's perfect for this type of story. He's not too mushy, but he's not too defiant, either.
Anyway, this is a wonderful story. I was surprised to see that you had started this at the beginning of the year and had 22 chaps up already. damn. I just hope you keep up the steady updates and finish this soon! Though I admit, I'll be sad to see it end.
ack. long review...
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is just...wow. You are really good. The dialogue is so great. I can't wait for your update!
Poor Severus! I just want to cry.
Poor Severus! I just want to cry.
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH PLEASE CONTINUE... I WANT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER SO BADLY...I LOVE YOUR STORY
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm very much enjoying the twists and turns. I love a story that isn't so predictable it's boring! Unpredictable stories rock. This story is by far my favorite on the site.
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, wow. I didn't expect that... jeez... ok, you've really really really got to update again soon. I seriously can't wait to see what happens... wow.