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Alright, It's me again, I liked the way you explaned the magics and the differences between them. It's an important thing to keep in mind when reading a battle between the different arts, in a story like yours. Goodbody has shown a surprising amount of skill, what will the cleaning spell, changed to a killing one and it's nice to see that some secondary characters can fight. Harry Potter and pals fight turned out as I expected, moral magic can't easily beat the demonic/celestial forms.
Thanks for writing such an interesting story, waiting eagerly for the rest.

Good, that's all I can say at this point. I'm a fan of your orginal characters, and do enjoy the weird plot twists. But I feel an echo from the second coyote tracks story. It's the kit imprisonment thing. Through otherwise no reason complains. Love the use of Harry Potter magic throughout the story, even through I find that form of magic rather weak,or prehaps lame. I'm just happy to see a good story every once and a while, so keep at it.

So sad (teardrop) poor Shippo. And the witch (glares at Goodbody), I really hate those kind of charaters, but the story is still great. Just the same I think I'll hold off on reviewing for a while.

Yay! The foretellings of doom, the blood, the death, the foxfire, great!*ahem* Keep writing. Awaiting the next Chapter :).

Very good! The amount of thought you seem to have put into the combining of the different forms of "magic" is very interesting. I have never really thought about what would happen in a story like this. Your original characters really work well with the others. The development between Shippo and Kit is one of the best I've ever seen or read about. Keep up the good work!